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Geremia
Geremia
Mar 30, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

BAD THINGS HAPPEN

BAD THINGS HAPPEN Bad things do happen And you did Mellifluous deception No sorrow No contrition Forward you go Stealing souls. Shattering dreams Shards of evil An innocent heart bleeds I wonder now what innocence You smell Sulphur and brimstone The stench of Hell 
— Geremia, Mar 30, 2009

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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

this one drips with the steady might

how many slip amongst the bogeymen of day and night souless people always say "there was something not quite right" and in the same breath "They looked normal" awesome poem for meaner times well written Longo!
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks

J.B. Longo-Geremia Boy, did you get that right! For the "meaner" people of the world. Have seen my share....Also elegantly said , my friend. Joe
yenti

yenti

17 years 2 months ago

Joe

You are picking up a few more with your work, I think that it takes people like Orgami to be able to read your work and comment on it with a truth that sees your work correctly. Me I just say what I feel, and this to me is you shouting at the Devil and shifting the blame a little, when with a little less memory and a greater love for yourself would scare that dark place into the light LOL , Youtake care of you and your work, Yours Ian.T