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WITH ONE WING WE TRY TO FLY
For one beautiful moment, I had just one wing to fly
This was a gift to me as a cloud seen the tears as I cry
He said to me if I give you just one wing
Will you let your heart to fly to your dreams?
And yes I will give you half
But your other wing lives in your past
You will need both of them to fly
One wing is your future and the other is made of lies
So the Sun ask of me child how can you fly
When you want so much love but your past is still alive
As my heart knew the only words, I could say
That I will make a new wing and the way to my dreams are steps always
For a bird cannot fly with just one wing
So how can we love if your soul is so torn between?
Put it all back together without the mistakes of a broken wing
And your true love will see a angel with both of your wings
Critiques
theladyblue
17 years 2 months ago
oh press...
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17 years 2 months ago
POETRY
press
17 years 2 months ago
Thank you
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
17 years 1 month ago
Flight with one wing