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Mar 24, 2009
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ACROSS THIS EMPTY SPACE
ACROSS THIS EMPTY SPACE Effortless my spirit glides Across this empty space Rooms once filled with things And memories A lifetime. An eternity A warm and gentle place That held my soul so long in its embrace A reflection of me through so many years A collection of smiles and tears This was my home A world where I would grow old And now As I follow yet another way I listen for voices past But I know the truth to what they say Nothing lasts No echoes heal my broken dreams Alone I wish my heart would stop its beat And kill this unkind melancholy As wistfully My spirit glides across this empty And Lonely space
— Geremia, Mar 24, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh woeful time, you travel
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
We all need to mve on...
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
I do, I do