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PARALLEL LINES

 PARALLEL LINES Parallel lines No right angles. No left turns Parallel lives Running In the same direction Parallel loves and rejections Quiet fears Silent screams Parallel sins We are paying for Parallel souls never to know The other’s tears The other’s d reams Never to see The same side of Eternity  
— Geremia, Mar 21, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Surely we sometimes do?

This paints a terrifying picture for me of running and running and never managing to communicate, when I feel I have communicated, albeit in my own way and not perhaps fully knowing the all of the other. This is frightening as if on metal railway lines screeching and screaming to eternity in a most terrible noise of non-understanding and negativity. This is frightening. I may need you to explain it a little more to enable me to grasp the meaning in another way. There is a lot of truth in what you say, some people never ponder what the other is really thinking or means with life, they just go on living their routine of the everyday never having tasted the joy of being understood and loved for what one is. That must be the bliss of life when it is achieved totally. I do believe some do. Anna dalla Norvegia.
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Yes!

J.B. Longo-Geremia Most people are fearful of human intamcy on any level. St. Exupéry in VOL DE NUIT and Camus in LA PESTE both lamented the absence of "la fraternité humaine." We "twirl in our own world" , I had written in several "poems", with no thought to anyone but ourselves at times -- or most of the time. Sicut est! See JACKALS on Forum if ever you get a chance, m ia cara Annuccia... Il Longobardolino OR Il Bardo Longobardolino :)
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

I agree, most people but.....

There are exceptions and when there is no effort to make an impression or be something that one isn't, then there can be real intimacy and close understanding I feel, but then both must feel the same, or there is this division. Relieved your Annuccia
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Yes

J.B. Longo-Geremia But we miss so many opprtunities in life.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

I saw a right angled tree today!!!

I say it for fun, I took a photograph of it too!!!!. We women are lateral thinkers (Edward de Bono) going off at tangents in conversations giving all present the opportunity to see things from different seemingly absurd angles, this sometimes leads to a surprise in understanding, working together to find an answer to a problem. The Chinese had a round table in their government and strove to come to a common decision that would hold as the best for the time being, whereas the West, eg: Britain with its house divided into for and against in debates created division and strife. We have a lot to learn. Long live striving to understand each other, men and women see things in different ways their chemical makeup different, and I say 'vive la diffèrence', because I wouldn't be without my 'opposites' and the wonderfully varied discussions that are provoked. Oh am I out of my depth here, perhaps ? Yours Annuccia.