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Mar 21, 2009
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PARALLEL LINES
PARALLEL LINES Parallel lines No right angles. No left turns Parallel lives Running In the same direction Parallel loves and rejections Quiet fears Silent screams Parallel sins We are paying for Parallel souls never to know The other’s tears The other’s d reams Never to see The same side of Eternity
— Geremia, Mar 21, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Surely we sometimes do?
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Yes!
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
I agree, most people but.....
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Yes
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
I saw a right angled tree today!!!