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Mar 20, 2009
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INFINITESIMAL DOT
AN INFINITESIMAL DOT You read me well In the words I write What you call my “poetry” You see beyond My eyes Expressionless Yes I leave behind bit and pieces Of me On white pages of reality Dreams fulfilled Hopes lost and gained again Who I am And Who I was sent to be Left to dance alone Silently An infinitesimal dot In Eternity
— Geremia, Mar 20, 2009
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Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
You will insist on having us in tears
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
A mystery
Kailashana
17 years 2 months ago
The infinitesimal dot called
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Part of an ever evolving mosaic....
infinite_dwarf
17 years 2 months ago
Longo
Geremia
17 years 2 months ago
Bits of immorality..