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ANGELS ON THE RUN

ANGELS ON THE RUN
 Flocks of Angels in confusion Lost in fearAnd DisillusionSeeking   shelter in dark placesRunning from the One and Only One Humankind was not their creationIt was all His sorcery No sense in another expiationTo end this Divine ComedyA  most perfect imperfectionThis
HisStunning Humanity       
— Geremia, Mar 10, 2009

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faerybeki

faerybeki

17 years 3 months ago

really like the line, ‘a

really like the line, 'a most perfect imperfection', i would possibly put 'and disillusion' straight after 'fear' so it was 1 line, it feels a bit disjointed but perhaps that is what you intended? Take care b x
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you :)

J.B. Longo-Geremia Fear and desilllusion-- purposely placed to give a subliminal sense of 'disconnect" . Grazie ! joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Paradoxical

Just as Zen- philosophy is paradoxical, life is a paradox is it not? Just Ann