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Geremia
Geremia
Mar 06, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

HEART OF GLASS

HEART OF GLASS Broken words and broken dreams. A shattered heart that never heals. Pieces of the soul scattered in the wind. Phantoms of hope in flight. Ghosts of what could have been Haunting  the night. A  crippled  heart once made of steel. A stunned soul that can no longer feel.
— Geremia, Mar 06, 2009

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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Joe,

I know this place...I´ve been there myself. Well expressed, my friend! Yours, ~Nina P.S. Do you spell "phantoms" with an "f"? I always spell it with a "ph", as you can see...
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Phantoms

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, Nina. "F" is the European spellng. Oops! :) And yes, too many of us tendered hearted have been there who shouldn't have. Joe
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zarul

17 years 3 months ago

well done 'ere

whoa. s heart-wrencing ur poem is. your body are what you heart are. and th state of moribund will come when your heart turns to glass-literallt. very beautiful poem
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Morgana Tragic…

17 years 3 months ago

And here in this world

And here in this world another heart of glass...like Nina, I can say I have been there before when the glass breaks and the rest of the world crashes. This is simple, but it says everything that a broken heart needs to say. Beautiful write my friend. Peace and Love Katie