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Life's Individuality
I was a raindrop falling, falling down
from atop the tallest tree
I fell and as did I saw
all the world before me
reflecting warmth and cool
shining bright and dull
distorted world oscillating
like the creative act of a jewel
dark the needles of the pine
divided me in two
then on we went just down, down,
down and slid along a grass leaf
green through all my light
leading to the mire
there to rest among the rest of
all the raindrops of the year
no longer one, the only one
a part of the great mass
of objects, spaces, seen
now conglomerated in the stream
of rushing waters, steam
I saw the world just as it is
this rounded globe of life
how strange and wild
how sad yet mild
a journey done
I am not one but many many others too
all of one piece of nature..................you.
Critiques
Morgana Tragic…
17 years 3 months ago
Life's Individuality
LissaMine
17 years 3 months ago
Raindrops 5/5
Ink Dragon
17 years 3 months ago
Ann,
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
You are so right dear Nina
Race_9togo
17 years 3 months ago
Ann
Nordic cloud
17 years 3 months ago
Thank you moonman
Geremia
17 years 3 months ago
Lyricism at its best
TheUnknownAuthor
17 years 3 months ago
Very very nice read this and
themoonman
17 years 3 months ago
Ann...