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Have You Noticed?

Have you noticed?
Some people use sidewalks,
Hallways, elevators, and stairs
For trash disposal.

It leaves me puzzled
And a little bit peeved:
I don't like looking at their leavings
As I move through the day.

Do they?

On any given day
I stop
And stoop to pick up
A good bit of litter.

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 2 months ago

*claps*

Well done on trying to make your town a nicer place to live. I totally respect people like you. I despise litterbugs. ~Jess K. ---------------------------------------------------- -"Three things that take forever to get here: birthday, Christmas, and the pizza delivery boy." - Garfield the Cat
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

17 years 1 month ago

Thanks!

I suppose it's possible to go too far, but I lean toward "the neater, the sweeter" when it comes to litter.
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Ink Dragon

17 years 2 months ago

Hi Rob,

I hate that, too. Here in Germany, people have been celebrating the carnival these days and there were empty bottles, grimy pizza boxes and sweets wrappers all over town. I am also one of the people who pick up their dog´s messes and I cannot understand why others don´t bother. (Yuk!) Yours, ~Nina
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

17 years 1 month ago

Pets

It seems all too likely that litterbugs aren't too clean about their pets... eewwwww
Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 2 months ago

Bravo!

Oh BRAVO!!! I loved this little write, I loved the shift in tempo & I LOVED the message. I was shocked recently when a friend threw some rubbish out of my car window, yes it was only a lolly wrapper, but I would never think to do it. I remember after picking up some rubbish a tourist had dropped in my town, scooping it up & tapping them, pointing out they had dropped this, it may be important (of course it wasn't!) & if they no longer needed it, there were several bins within arms reach up & down the street. Dropping rubbish like that would be, to me, like just standing in the street & peeing yourself when toilets are within walking distance. Hmmm I'm sounding righteous... guess it's soemthing I feel passionate about. Anni I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

17 years 1 month ago

Glad

Glad you enjoyed it; here's to a neater world!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 10 months ago

Ron, reminds me of Iron Eyes

Ron, reminds me of Iron Eyes Cody anti-litter commercial i think of 70's. Remember it? For those too young, or from another country, Iron Eyes Cody is an American Indian, and one tear falls from his eyes at the sight of all the litter on American highways. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JzlplIeXn2g&feature=related Thank you for your poem, wonderfully versed. ~A "There are very few human beings who receive the truth, complete and staggering, by instant illumination. Most of them acquire it fragment by fragment, on a small scale, by successive developments, cellularly, like a laborious mosaic." Anais Nin
Rob Graber

Rob Graber

16 years 10 months ago

Thanks!

Yes, I well recall that TV ad. Can it have been so long ago? I would have guessed it more like 90's than 70's. But then you know what they say: Time flies when U R having fun... :-,?