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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 20, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

PROMETHEUS UNBOUND

 

PROMETHEUS  UNBOUND

PROMETHEUS UNBOUND
A QUESTION OF IMMORTALITY

Limitless

Boundless

Wings of an eagle

Fire of a shooting star

Seering Heaven

Harrowing Hell

Reaching far

Defiantly

Stunning

God’s Realm

The Human Will

Soul

Spirit

Set free

Righteous madness

Fever

Insanity

Only fools could see

Rushing into

Eternity

 


— Geremia, Feb 20, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Hi

this one is ok, but am waiting for you to put another type of poetry, to see what or where we are going, this is still very expressive andto the point, Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThanks, my

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thanks, my friend, but my poetry is simple and direct-- Spartan edge and simplicity with a touch of Italian espresso..:) I tend to fa ll into prose otherwise. Joe
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

P.S.

J.B. Longo-Geremia Ian, have you read any of the writes I put on Forum-- General Poetry? Joe
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Ink Dragon

17 years 3 months ago

Hi Longo,

I was drawn to this piece by its title, because I am working on a Prometheus poem, too. I like this piece, it reads as breathlessly as Prometheus must have felt after running down Mount Olympus with the precious fire...Also, really good imagery, I could see fire in the sky... Yours, ~Nina P.S. l.5 seering-> searing? P.P.S. forgot to leave you my rating first time around, so here you are!
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaIt is

J.B. Longo-Geremia It is "seering" I thought it was "searing." Thanks. I am putting another PROMETHEUS "poem" on FORUM. I have 60 pages of poetry on BLOGIT and did a series on classical and biblical figures. Mille grazie, Nina Joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Soaring

It stands on its own too, and I love it, I am in its flames and fires fighting too and soaring with the eagle, if its like that, then I am definitely not frightened of eternity and will join you there-espresso! Yours Ann