FOLLOW MY SHADOW: POET II

Follow my shadow
[The Poet II ] Follow my shadow wherever it goes.I will show you places you’ve never been. Follow my words wherever they flowI will show you things you’ve never seen.Follow me to my broken heartAnd see how it can mend Follow my soul to heaven and hell And I will show you how to live on. Follow my pain wherever it takes me And I will show you how to smile.Follow my dreams and dream with meDreams of immortalityTogether we will feelNew worlds that have no end.Touch my visions I will show you how to singAgain

— Geremia, Feb 18, 2009

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Country/Region: USA

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Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, my friend. It is a reflection of who I am and what I want to share with others. We all need to have a positive impact- if possible -- on the life of others, yes? :) Joe

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Perfectly beautiful

So this must be what you are too according to your last comment, how happy that makes me to feel that your attitude to your own situation can be countered by such wisdom and understanding. The poem is stunning and wonderful. I am not with you on immortality but so what! I can find no fault in this poem. Yours Ann of Norway

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you my friend, Anna dalla Norvegia ...:) joe