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TIME MACHINE

  TIME MACHINE I sit in my time machineAnd Click on a memoryMy mind findsA day and placeOf  moments When You were all with meMy spirit flies from star  to starDeeper I goFarther than farFrom this realitySeconds that hypnotizeThen Lost againWhen all is said and done What is gone is goneNo one
Comes back from the dead     
— Geremia, Feb 17, 2009

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

How true

A rather sad look at life, maybe prompted by sad losses in the past. Now live in the present and see the stars shining their bright lights and feel alive again. We are only here while we are and then there is nothing, we do not feel any more. Hope you have the happiest of lives from now on. Yours Ann of Norway
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Thank you

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, my d ear new f riend.l You "read" me well. My full name is JOSEPH BERNRD JOHN di LONGO-GEREMIA or Giuseppe Bernardo Giovanni di LONGO-GEREMIA. Longo was my maternal granfather. Short for LONGOBARDI or LONG BEARDS -- nam given to Germanic tribe that settled in that region of southern I taly. Who know, we may be related.:) Joe
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 3 months ago

Una nome molto fabuloso

If that is the correct Italian. But it is and what a name to carry with you like a rich velvet robe with ermine edges and all, and the long-beards gives it a chivalry, a feeling of knights of old and even Nordic Kings, wow we all pale next to such 'royalty' of name. The Longobardians are known as you say. Oh Noble sir, it is a privilege to correspond with you. I commented here before I knew the truth of your tale of sadness...I have said it there. Strength to your tolerance of he Parkinson' and we are all with you in that effort I am sure of it. Love Ann
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaSei molto

J.B. Longo-Geremia Sei molto gentile!!! { You are v ery kind } Not nobility, just strong southern Italian peasant stock. That is what keeps me going, yes? :) The honor and pleasure, my dear Anna, is mine. Joe P.S> Yes, good Ialian: Un nome faboloso..... Ancora, grazie tante...