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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 15, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SHARDS OF A SOUL

  Shards of a soul I saw myselfIn that silent stareAwareOf being twoNot oneButReflections of you Same eyes that show  What is to beAndWas so many years agoIntensity of your memoryA portrait of colorsDark and brightSwimming freeIn   placesI knowShards of a soulFractured mirror OfYou growing oldAgainIn me   
— Geremia, Feb 15, 2009

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Cloudthings

Cloudthings

17 years 3 months ago

Smooth unfolding

Oooh I really liked this peice, it has a delicious way of unfolding in the smoothest way. Thank you Anni May I wish to walk gracefully..... so as not to spill water.
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Beautiful memory

There's a lovely rhythm in this Longobradolino, as like the oscillations on the surface of disturbed waters reflecting and reflecting constantly, they repeat the patterns and fascinate our visions of what isn't there described, shards of reality made unreal and magically disguised. Your Annuccia