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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 10, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

AIMLESS SOULS

 

Aimless Souls

Aimless souls
Wandering treacherously
Among the living
Filled
With hate and envy
Hearts that feed
On innocence
Trading kindness
With cruelty
Spirits lost lingering
In dark shadows
Waiting

— Geremia, Feb 10, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Aimless Souls

A complex short piece, sorry more of a statement, and you know from your heart that there is more to this than what you have put, I await your Edit. I am being naughty to you but you can respond LOL ,Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Thank again, Ian

J.B. Longo-Geremia My poetry is "understated" as I USUSALLY am :). Sometimes I think my poetry reveals a bit too much-- but it is up to the "reader" to fill in the gaps of this "mystery." :) For me less is more-- kinda. Power of the "strike" of words and mages. Hit and run, so to speak! LOL your friend, joe