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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 05, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

MIDNIGHT RIDER ---Major revision New poem

Midnight Rider   Midnight rider

Wait for me
 Fly me places I’d never be
 Let me soar higher

Still

Through

Diamonds midnight blue
 Fill

My soul with dreams
 Midnight Rider

Please

Don't let this night end

Until

You take me home again




MIDNIGHT RIDER is a metaphor for me or eupemism. Can you guess?



    
— Geremia, Feb 05, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

Longo

To me this needs a little work on its flow, the concept seems ok though, Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Reworked

J.B. Longo-Geremia You were right, Ian. Thanks. I reworked it. joe
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

P.S.

J.B. Longo-Geremia I am having quite a bit of trouble with the technology on this site, especially spacing. I already find it difficult to type due to atrophy of muscles on right side. It becomes frustratng when the techncal aspects don't "co-operate." :) joe
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W.C.Wampler

17 years 3 months ago

Midnight rider poem

Longo,I like the way the poem drifts along, short and sweet. Years ago I was building a 1948 Ford hot rod, I was to call it Midnight Rider after the Allman Bros song (ain't gonna let the catch the Midnight Rider) Then there was the crystal blue pyramids,.. Your particular Midnight Rider is a mystery.....Meds? wcw
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 3 months ago

Who is that "masked stranger"?

J.B. Longo-Geremia THE ANGEL OF DEATH {"Dream Dance" explains it all]. Wish to hell it w ere meds ..or somethin' else. LOL Thanks joe