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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 03, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

VALLEYS

VALLEYS In a valley deep and coldMountains so highI can’t see the sunI call His nameThe One and only OneSilence of InfinityDid you truly dieOn that crossIs that whyYou don't answer meMother MaryAre you thereOr were you just a dreamFor all lost children  hereOn my ownI need to beginTo climb those mountains Once again  
— Geremia, Feb 03, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 3 months ago

The need to be lifted

This seems like a belief, that you wish was shown to you, but those things are earned, from whoever you believe in. If you are happy in the valley, or cannot believe that there is a power that can fill the valley to the mountain top, then it will stay a valley, and hide you from all things. Believe in your God and the power of the universe and stand on that mountain, Yours Ian.T
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 3 months ago

Have I told you lately I

Have I told you lately I love your poetry? Intelligently poetic and highly liberating ;-) ~Anna "We have to try to get rid of the notion of time. And when you have an intense contact of love with nature or another human being, like a spark, then you understand that there is no time and that everything is eternal." Paulo Coelho