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Geremia
Geremia
Feb 01, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WHEN

   WHEN Will you love me just as muchWhenI can no longer feel your touchWill you hold me tenderlyWhenI can no longer seeWill you understandWhen I never walk againWill you smile and look at meWhenI  forget who you are Will you catch my dying breath AndHold it in your gentle soulWill you keep me safe and warmIn your sweet and tender heart
— Geremia, Feb 01, 2009

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Wordsmith

17 years 4 months ago

When

Very well structured. No litter or lint in this poem. And, the mood that I sense you are trying to project, is there. Great!