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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 29, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Creatures

  Creatures Soulless creatures that roam the dayThirsting yet for another preyFeeding on love’s devotionNature’s abominationA godless mutationYetNo one can seeTheir deformityHidden cleverlyIn words of pearl, diamonds and goldMellifluous deceptionSpiritless and cold  
— Geremia, Jan 29, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Hard to

grasp this one but on reflection a good piece well thought out, as it carries a deep meaning of deception and could be in many fields, well done, Yours Ian.T
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Oh yes I KNOW them

We had one in our family, with gold teeth, we were little but being so perhaps saw through this smiling falsely jovial man and he WAS bad. Ann.
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orgami

17 years 2 months ago

Nerve Impulse

Oh love this rework peice masterful and brilliant strikes at them brilliant and peircing as their treachery smiles
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 2 months ago

Thanks, buddy

J.B. Longo-Geremia I have been the "food" for many "creatures" these past few years "as their treachery smiles" -- well said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Joe