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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

A MILLION LIGHT YEARS AWAY

A Million Light Years Away  I don’t hear silent whisperingsIn my dreamsAnymoreI don’t feel your soulWrapped around mineAnymoreI no longer seeVisions of what used to beLost TimeDeath of MemoryA life each passing day That seemsA million light years away 
— Geremia, Jan 24, 2009

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yenti

yenti

17 years 4 months ago

Longo

I have read the four of your pieces in the lonely club, and can't see a reason why they are not commented on. They are simple to understand, and easy to read and quite interesting, as they portray feelings that most of us have at some stage, well done for refreshing the memory Yours Ian.T
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 4 months ago

J.B. Longo-GeremiaThank you,

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you, Ian. I appreciate your encouragement. All comes from the heart and experience,,,,:) Grazie tante ! [ so many thanks] Joe P.S. IF you read DREAM DANCE there is there much that explains what I write. My style I describe as Spartan edge and sharpness with a touch of espresso, no?