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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 20, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

MEMORIES

Memories

  I dance with shadows 

Ghosts I’ve seen beforeAround and aroundWe whirlGliding across the floorSilent melodies play The soulChasing awayDemons dark and coldIn a dream my spirits flyTogetherWe twirlTo better days gone by   
— Geremia, Jan 20, 2009

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Rett

Rett

17 years 4 months ago

You have a way with words

That carries a person with them to wherever you wish them to go. another one that is well done here and beautiful. I have become a fan of your writing and wish I had more time to peruse it more often. Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

17 years 4 months ago

I like this one.

Had to get around the double-spacing, but once I did I found this smooth and meaningful. Nice imagery throughout, with a feeling of sad nostalgia that I like very much. An excellent write Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race