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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 18, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I'M FALLING...

I’m falling We stumbleWe fallCan never be everythingTo allWe pretend not to seeDeceit and liesAs we hideIn our silent criesWe loveAnd are unlovedWe don’t love anymoreOne door 
Opens another closesThere are seldom choicesWe tryTo hear our inner voicesThat sayThere is a far better wayThere is no endWe stumbleWe fallAndBegin again
— Geremia, Jan 18, 2009

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Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 4 months ago

Your soft-spoken poems belie

Your soft-spoken poems belie the intensity in your eyes... ~A "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~