SILENT DREAMS

Filled with emotion,and feelings I like that! Nicely done~ Loved: "Catch the lyrics of my soul" The ending, also beautiful! _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________

You captured a soul, yet it must be yours, as it is the only one that will live with you in your eternity. Lovely subtle write, and very deep within your own thoughts, Yours Ian.T

I really enjoy your pure-essence-poetry Longo. Bellissimo! "All in all, it's just another brick in the wall." Pink Floyd There are no walls except for the ones we build. ~me~

"Streams Of shadows pierce the light..." I know this is metaphorical but today I saw the shadows on the surface of the bark of trees, it was a design so beautiful some clear and crisp edged, some blurring towards their edges, some totally blurred and I thought, that is how your stream of shadows looks, not uniform in consistency or shape, colour or pattern, random and particular, so you must learn to see the differences in that stream of shadows and from them gain an insight to their meaning and expression as not all will be hostile, not in natures ways, all cannot be hostile the differences are always present even though they may be subtle and through them one can see a light beyond their shade, one of blissful release from all pain which must be the euphoric nirvana of those who suffer pain for any length of time and in such intensity as you have. We are powerless, yet we can weave a cradle of words to buoy you up, to give a sweet breeze of understanding when you are in the depths of your plight and we all do so with all our might. My sympathies and strength I add as best I can, love from your Annuccia