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Jan 12, 2009
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My Grandmother's Garden
My Grandmother’s Garden {as I remembered it at five }
Rosemary, Oregano, Parsley and ThymeFour fig trees standing in a line.One Mulberry and two Crabapple trees.Five Rose of Sharon guarded by bees.A row of hydrangea blue, rose and pinkSmall herb garden in an old kitchen sink,Lettuce and Tomatoes growing in the backEggplants raven black.This is how I remember itHow I wish it to be.This was her garden,Her memory.
Rosemary, Oregano, Parsley and ThymeFour fig trees standing in a line.One Mulberry and two Crabapple trees.Five Rose of Sharon guarded by bees.A row of hydrangea blue, rose and pinkSmall herb garden in an old kitchen sink,Lettuce and Tomatoes growing in the backEggplants raven black.This is how I remember itHow I wish it to be.This was her garden,Her memory.
— Geremia, Jan 12, 2009
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W.C.Wampler
17 years 4 months ago
Garden poem
Geremia
17 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaYes. Very
Arrow
17 years 4 months ago
Wonderful last line
Geremia
17 years 4 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaOne of
Nordic cloud
17 years 2 months ago
Oh crab apples