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Geremia
Geremia
Jan 07, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Silent Blues

  Silent Blues Silent bluesQuiet daysGliding slowly thru a maze Of memoryQuiet heartTranquilityWhat others seeSweet melancholyShort beginningsToo many endsPassages and corridorsTime closing all doorsToo late nowFinal showTake a bowMy turn to go      
— Geremia, Jan 07, 2009

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Rett

Rett

17 years 4 months ago

Longo

I like this a lot. as your line says, sweet melancholy. Very well done! Respectfully, Rett: "Next time you think you're perfect, walk on water."