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Jan 05, 2009
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A good - bye love song
A Good-Bye Love Song A Good-Bye Love Song
It’s not that I don’t love youIt’s not that I don’t careIt’s just that I found someoneWho knows that I am thereA smileA tender touchA knowing lookIs all it tookI’m easy to pleaseNever into gamesNo teaseLoyal and trueAs a Canadian MountyYes indeedTo youBut you seeI found meIn someone else’s eyesAnd who I am Is someone you can never be
It’s not that I don’t love youIt’s not that I don’t careIt’s just that I found someoneWho knows that I am thereA smileA tender touchA knowing lookIs all it tookI’m easy to pleaseNever into gamesNo teaseLoyal and trueAs a Canadian MountyYes indeedTo youBut you seeI found meIn someone else’s eyesAnd who I am Is someone you can never be
— Geremia, Jan 05, 2009
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Geremia
17 years 5 months ago
J.B. Longo-GeremiaNever
Nordic cloud
16 years 4 months ago
What a decidedly delicate