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The Call of The Ilford Sun

Under the Ilford sun
the air so fresh and sweet
it's easy not to run
in the blistering summer heat

In the early morning light
the silence as we sleep
awaken with all your might
without the noise of a street

The joy of seeing family there
of smiles and coffee bound
was every bit the wanting fare
for a place in heart so sound

Long walks with my leggy niece
on daily trips to secret parts
gave my mind some summer peace
and discussions on apricot tarts

Wallaroos and black cockatoos
natures windows held open wide
pistols at dawn for the fools
for them there is no ride

The sweeping landscape
a painters true dream 
in a wide open space
a slice of mango on top of the cream

My sister in her resourceful self
found a tree of abundance
to bring a smile to three happy elf's
apricot jam did not become a redundance

The need to kill the thistle weed
a joy to fun to miss
even with a driving lesson in heed
it can make you get in a tiz

And my dear brother-in law
a brave face in the dreaded heat
placing stone not straw
too long standing on his feet

A soothing ale would quench our thirst
while resting after we were done
the afternoon light would be our first
in the call of the Ilford sun

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weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 4 months ago

No matter how personal,

also a vivid Australian portrait. Do wish you would let me give you some feedback on typos and scansion though, could improve the poem a lot. cheers, Jess
Seren

Seren

16 years 10 months ago

You were right

It has the same feel as mine, the laymans aussie ... I loved this stanza it resonated in me ' Under the Ilford sun the air so fresh and sweet it’s easy not to run in the blistering summer heat You made me remember being a young girl running down the street NO SHOES on my mother was forever horrifed,( I hated shoes , still do lol I am a hippy at heart with regards to some things,) But I have to say I remember how much it burned my feet and I had blisters on the bottom from the hot tar it had been 40 degrees that day for you farenheit people thats 100 degrees give or take LOL ... Thank you for showing this one to me over the next few weeks I will be going through all the poetry i Havent read yet so I am sure to find some more gems ... This one is now my favourite though (HUG) much Love Jayne x x
Fleur MacDonald

Fleur MacDonald

16 years 10 months ago

It was the best

christmas I had in a long while. I'm usually working over the crissy break and can't get out of sydney so I spend it by myself painting. But my sister asked me to her shack at Ilford with her family for the first time, it was really hot but bloody fantastic and this poem came out of it!!! Glad you liked it sweetie!! There are photo's if you wanna see you can go to my flickr site http://www.flickr.com/photos/33083537@N05/ and go to the Ilford set!! Now try and stay snug as a bug in a rug!!! lol...xxxxfleur