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Jan 06, 2009
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The Call of The Ilford Sun
Under the Ilford sun
the air so fresh and sweet
it's easy not to run
in the blistering summer heat
In the early morning light
the silence as we sleep
awaken with all your might
without the noise of a street
The joy of seeing family there
of smiles and coffee bound
was every bit the wanting fare
for a place in heart so sound
Long walks with my leggy niece
on daily trips to secret parts
gave my mind some summer peace
and discussions on apricot tarts
Wallaroos and black cockatoos
natures windows held open wide
pistols at dawn for the fools
for them there is no ride
The sweeping landscape
a painters true dream
in a wide open space
a slice of mango on top of the cream
My sister in her resourceful self
found a tree of abundance
to bring a smile to three happy elf's
apricot jam did not become a redundance
The need to kill the thistle weed
a joy to fun to miss
even with a driving lesson in heed
it can make you get in a tiz
And my dear brother-in law
a brave face in the dreaded heat
placing stone not straw
too long standing on his feet
A soothing ale would quench our thirst
while resting after we were done
the afternoon light would be our first
in the call of the Ilford sun
the air so fresh and sweet
it's easy not to run
in the blistering summer heat
In the early morning light
the silence as we sleep
awaken with all your might
without the noise of a street
The joy of seeing family there
of smiles and coffee bound
was every bit the wanting fare
for a place in heart so sound
Long walks with my leggy niece
on daily trips to secret parts
gave my mind some summer peace
and discussions on apricot tarts
Wallaroos and black cockatoos
natures windows held open wide
pistols at dawn for the fools
for them there is no ride
The sweeping landscape
a painters true dream
in a wide open space
a slice of mango on top of the cream
My sister in her resourceful self
found a tree of abundance
to bring a smile to three happy elf's
apricot jam did not become a redundance
The need to kill the thistle weed
a joy to fun to miss
even with a driving lesson in heed
it can make you get in a tiz
And my dear brother-in law
a brave face in the dreaded heat
placing stone not straw
too long standing on his feet
A soothing ale would quench our thirst
while resting after we were done
the afternoon light would be our first
in the call of the Ilford sun
Comments
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
No matter how personal,
Fleur MacDonald
17 years 4 months ago
feedback
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
cool, will reply by email
Seren
16 years 10 months ago
You were right
Fleur MacDonald
16 years 10 months ago
It was the best