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This Economic Crisis

My son has given up his job:
he survived for almost a year
but finished up stressed-out.

He worked fourteen hours a day
for 1,500 euros a month.
He is a land surveyor,
and he studied for five  years  
to get his degree.
That was his first job
and he is disillusioned.

One night they kept him in the office till 5 a.m.
then he had to go to work again at 8 a.m.
and measure things accurately all day.

If he made a mistake,
the company would lose money
and he would be responsible.

Another night they had him measuring by lamplight:
the job had to be finished in time for elections
to please a local politician,
who had been expensively wined and dined
in order to get the contract.

They could of course have employed two surveyors
on bearable eight-hour shifts,
but that wouldn't have been cost-effective.  

He was never paid any overtime.

I realize things are worse in many countries,
but right now I can only think about my son.

No bank would give him a loan
because his contract was short-term.

His income was relatively good.
Most young workers in Spain
make a thousand euros a month
or even less...

They can't get a mortgage,
so they rent a bedroom
in an old, shared flat
for 400 euros a month
in Barcelona or Madrid.

By the time they've paid for light,
heat, phone calls, food and clothes,
there's no money left for a car,
let alone for a home of their own.

Don't worry, I'm not a socialist,
but I would ask Spanish leaders:
"Are you surprised that car sales are down,
or that many new houses are empty? "

Politicians, of course, earn more.
Perhaps they lack the imagination
to understand how hard it is
for most of us to just get by.
Perhaps they were always rich.

Obama may be an exception.

If consumers can't buy because their income is low,
demand for goods and services goes down,
production is cut, workers are laid off
(and so have less money to spend in shops)  
and the downward spiral just goes on.

I'm not an economist,
but I believe the original Mr.Ford
used to pay his workers well,
so they could buy his cars.

Another question is what the banks have been up to...

I repeat, I'm not a socialist,
but giving everyone third-world wages
and impossible working hours
just isn't going to work.

Sorry if this is not a poetic subject.

In England my younger daughter
gets the minimum wage in a café:
eight hours a day on her feet,
for eight hundred pounds a month.
Just her room costs four hundred.
She studied aeronautical engineering for six years
and that was the best she could find.

My other daughter, in the same country,
is paid the same salary  - as an assistant teacher.
She studied English and French for five years
and has a Master of Arts
in translation and interpreting,
and that was the best she could find.

They barely get by.

I do not expect  them to marry
and have some children,
because they can't afford to.
Grandpas are of another time.

Soon no one will have enough  cash
to buy anything from anyone.

I suggest that the governments of certain countries
should be requested to raise their minimum wage
(if they have such a thing)
until it's similar to ours,
so that their citizens can buy our exports
as well as exporting to us.
Their businesses would still compete
because their employees
are such hard workers.

Who knows, child labour
might even disappear,
because better-paid parents
would  keep their kids at school.

The middle-men, it's true
could well lose out:
they would no longer be able
to buy shoes for one euro in Asia
and sell them for twenty in the West.

But I can live with that...

Money has to circulate  - that's trade:
if you take out buyers,
then sellers are lost too.
— Robert Melliard, Dec 27, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Asturias, Spain

Favorite Poets: Chaucer, Shakespeare, Du Bellay, Metaphysicals, Petrarch, Dante, Baudelaire, Lorca, Becquer, Coleridge

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 5 months ago

Robert

May not be a poem, but it was a darn good read. A glimpse into your world is just as ghastly as ours here. This is a global problem we all suffer together. The worse economy ever on record I think. Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Poetry or prose

Thanks for your comment. It raises the old question of the difference between poetry and prose. For me the basic difference lies simply in the way poets cut their ideas into shorter lines, leaving more blank space around the edges, so that readers tend to concentrate a little more than usual on what they are reading. So it's a way of focusing their attention. There are other factors which often come into play, such as strongly expressed feelings, rhyme, rhythm, repetition of certain words or lines, flow and so on. But a topic like the economic crisis just needs clear thinking, which is why I say in the text itself that it may not be poetic theme. I guess I might have written this one in prose, too, but I think the use of varying line-lengths helped me to get my point of view across, especially where I left a line all on its own sometimes for greater impact. Best Wishes, Robert.
Rett

Rett

17 years 5 months ago

Good Read Robert

Henry Ford was an exception at the time. He paid his worker way more than everyone else was because he wanted them to have enough to be able to buy one of his cars. Capitalism at it's best. Wish it was still working at its best. I hope Obama is an exception, but have my extreme doubts. Everything seems to be a two edged sword. Lower wages=less money=less buying power. Higher wages=less profit=layoffs=less money= less less less. Where is the frickin balance these days. Almighty profit or almighty poverty. Right now we are in the worst economic downturn since the 1970's and the Jimmy Carter era with just a few wrong moves we can equal the great Depression of the 1930's. There have to be some very careful choices made by the government right now or we are in very deep trouble for a long time. I wrote a piece about the great depression here and I am sitting on pins and needles hoping we don't make the same mistakes again. Good write Robert. Respectfully, Rett: "I didn't do it! I'm innocent! Uh, what was the question again mama?" Rett
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

The double-edged sword

Thanks for your interesting comment. I like the way people can be either Republicans or Democrats here at Neopoet but they respect each others' opinions and express their ideas openly. That's democracy in action. As for you double-edged sword theory, I agree that higher wages can make a business less competitive, but I believe that if everyone paid such salaries all over the world then the problem of cut-throat competition would disappear. Surely the United Nations could do something to improve the terrible conditions of labour in many Asian countries, for example, where children are paid peanuts (or even nothing at all) to work long hours. There cannot be 'free' trade when slave-labour is still around. There has to be a degree of fair play in the world economy in order for capitalism to work properly. By the way, the reason I have hopes for Obama is because I understand he worked in some kind of educational programme with youngsters from poor families, so he may be more in touch with harsh social realities than most politicians are. Best Wishes, Robert.
yenti

yenti

17 years 5 months ago

Robert

The world turns and many are in trouble, nothing changes, the greed stays the same, the organisation is as crooked. I recieve a small pension from when I worked on aircraft, for our wonderful government.It was at the time calculated by the number of hours that I had workede for them during the previous year, and salary earned, I use it to pay off a few small debts, just before Xmas I had a letter from some place saying that they are paying me too much pension and it will be reviewed and adjusted in April, happy Xmas an all that. The damn polotitions get more free, for their second house to carry out repairs and things that both of us get to live on both of us being on Old age pension. But we are very lucky here, I don't get bombed, by out of control countries that no-one will call to task. I have free medical for the most minor thing. I don't have to walk 10 miles a day to get water, that may carry sickness. We have a water system and electric system next to non. We have shops full of food and things they can't possibly sell unless they bring their prices down. Last year we scraped along in what others would call luxury. I even sent $60 to our two friends in USA, because they were going through a bad time struggling with medical bills and not having food. Yes the great US of A where I have so many stories of people being out of homes and not being able to cope with the way things are going.The normal run of people throughout this world are beautiful people all trying to just be, greed, and maybe their religious leaders has turned them into what they perceive they are or should be other than, Just people and beautiful souls...... How's that for a few words on your writing, well put out and needed, Yours Ian.T.
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Pensions

I find your comment fascinating, especially regarding pensions. One of the reasons my elder brother took his life was that he was only receiving seven hundred pounds of unemployment benefit each month after losing his job as a head teacher (just because he had an affair with a younger member of staff) and he was worried that his future pension was going to be even worse because so many people were out of work at that time that fewer contributions were being made to pension funds. I have a friend in Spain who believes it's better to buy apartments and rent them out than to pay money into a fund which may eventually run into trouble. And when you die, of course, your children inherit the apartments, whereas they cannot inherit the money you plough into a pension scheme. Government pensions should be rock-solid, but from your comment I see that even they can be suddenly reduced. If politicians spent less on weapons, among other things, pensions could be considerably higher. I also agree with your remarks about the privileges we enjoy in developed countries, such as electricity and well-stocked shops. But I believe that if workers were paid better in developing countries, their economies would grow faster because people would have more money to spend, so their internal demand for products would be higher, instead of them having to export most of their production to us at rock-bottom prices. The people who really make money out of the present system are intermediaries who buy shoes for one Euro in Asia and sell them for twenty in Europe or the US. Asian businesses would still be competitive if wages were raised, because employees are used to working very hard in such countries. The problem is that its very difficult to achieve this kind of change. Even if the U.N. tries to stop slave-labour, many governments turn a blind eye to the problem. In many developing economies, trade unions are illegal and a minimum wage doesn't even exist. And according to some distressing documentaries I have seen, young children are often employed in appalling conditions. The world trade game needs a basic minimum of fair play or international rules so that everyone can play on equal terms and the creativity of capitalism can do its work. Best Wishes, Robert. P.S. My scant faith in politicians was further shaken recently when some bright Eurocrats dreamt up the idea of a sixty-five-hour working week, presumably in an attempt to transport us all back to the nineteenth century. I believe this proposal has since been quashed by the European Parliament, but it really showed how out-of -touch political leaders can be. Such a measure would only increase unemployment, because two people would be doing the work of three...
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 5 months ago

In luci language, you

In luci language, you expressed your point, keeping the interest of the readers through out.I could not have studied a detective story with higher interest.
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Many thanks again (having just read your comment on 'Colours')

This is almost a prose-poem, but it seems to be getting through to people anyway. Perhaps the references to the situation of my own children makes it more immediate, though they are obviously just tiny examples of a global problem. I am glad I managed to keep your interest in quite a long poem. I usually try to be short and sweet, as you often seem to do in your philosophical poetry. Best Wishes, Robert.
S

sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 5 months ago

Choice of words

I enjoyed the truth you placed. Yet I ask myself as I look to my armor and pull the twenty two as she and I are friends. Not to cost a lot and yet I can walk home with a meal. Glad that I am a soldier from the past and thanks to my Dad I will try and yes I will survive. Good luck and well the best that you can keep is the soul you strive to loose. Steven A. Kacer
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R.M.Shanmugam

17 years 5 months ago

You being such a

You being such a personality, you should not give us audience by a horse face. we are eager to see how you look. without knowing one's face we cannot admire. even Gods demand faces. please poste your image, which will not be inconvenient to the one who is so transperent in nature. if time permits pl. read Cleopatra's glory, helen of troy and the concept of the soul.
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Dear Mr. Shanmugam

I shall try to act on your suggestion even though I don't yet understand how to examine and upload photographs with my new Linux operating system I have a friend who can help me, but he is in England for Christmas. I have to warn you that my appearance is less loveable than that of the donkey, and my hair is almost as grey. Years do not pass in vain... You compliment me by calling me transparent. I have to be careful about that sometimes, because I'm afraid that over-exposition of our minds can be as shocking as showing off our bodies, and therefore a kind of pornography. I'll try to read the poems you mention. Best Wishes, Robert. P.S. Up till now the donkey has suitably represented my stubbornness, at least.
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Dear Robert,

I am dreadfully sorry for your son losing his job, and keeping my fingers crossed for him that he will soon find something else, perhaps even better. Quite apart from the poetry/prose question, I feel that you speak the truth. My brother has just been fired, too, and his working conditions were similar to those you describe: working overtime without extra payment, getting paid ridiculously little in the first place, and then given the sack for "economic reasons". In my (German) hometown, many factories are doing short hours or firing people at the moment, the ecological crisis has struck here in Germany, too. And what did our clever politicians do about it? They raised the taxes, of course. Now we all have even less money left to buy things like food, clothing, let alone cars or houses... I love your stanza about the politicians, ID
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Loss of jobs

Thanks for your interesting comment. My son has been told that most other construction companies treat young employees the same way, so he is considering looking for a different kind of job, like being a policeman or a teacher with a shorter working day. He has even pondered the idea of going back to University to study something better-paid. I wish I had been able to warn him about the conditions for surveyors in Spain when he started higher education, but at that time I had no idea they were so bad. Too little information is given to students about their future possibilities in a certain career. With modern media available, such as film or video, it would be relatively easy to interview working adults from different walks of life about the conditions of their profession and show such films to pupils before they go to University. This could prevent many mistakes and life-long regrets. Personally, I wish I had studied medicine, because I realize now that there are few ways of helping others that can compare with being a doctor. I'm sorry to hear about your brother and the situation in Germany. The economy is so global now that domino effects take over when I crisis starts in any corner of the world. Raising taxes is definitely not the solution. On the contrary, they should be brought down in order to give consumers more spending-power and so increase demand for goods. I believe this has been done in Britain, though probably only to increase support for the present Prime Minister. Best Wishes, Robert.
ID

Ink Dragon

17 years 5 months ago

Robert,

I thank you for your thoughts, which echo mine. I think it´s incredible that we laymen can see that the solution would be to lower the taxes, while the powers that be do not! We are going to have some major elections here in Germany in 2009, I just hope that people will vote differently this time... By the way, my brother has possibly found a new job, which is even better paid. He is having an interview there today, I´m keeping my fingers crossed. So, all in all, 2009 can only be an improvement compared to 2008! Sending you best wishes, too, ID
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Tink

17 years 5 months ago

Interesting subject for sure

One that everyone can relate to. Owning a business (actually two) I know how much this state of the economy hurts! My husband has worked so hard all of his life for the little that we have and now we awake every day with bated breath to see how we can juggle things so not to loose anything - including our home. it sucks! I know no answers. Thanks for sharing. It helps to know we aren't alone in this situation. Live, Laugh and Love (and don't forget to write) Tink
Robert Melliard

Robert Melliard

17 years 5 months ago

Many thanks Tink

It's usually a little taboo to talk about our financial situation, but in the present economic context I think it's justified, which is why I wrote this poem (if that's what it is). All I can say to give you hope for your two businesses and your home is that this kind of crisis doesn't last forever, especially when governments intervene to support key sectors. I have a friend who teaches English here in Spain. He has a pension of five hundred Euros a month and has to pay four hundred to rent his apartment, so he'll just have to go on teaching till he drops dead. The problem is that as he gets older fewer pupils phone him for tuition. In my case, at least I have a home of my own and one or two other investments, so I should be able to survive even on a low pension (I am a teacher, too). Best Wishes, Robert.