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Geremia
Geremia
Dec 25, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SAD INDIFFERENCE

 SAD INIDIFFERENCE Wasted time and energyA heart that fights no moreFor the object of it’s adorationNot like beforeNo candles burningNo incenseNo magic IncantationTo make what can never beA cold and distant stareLingers in breathless airAnd Steals itself awayTo another dayTo memoryReality is what I seeFires turned to ashFrozen and sad indifference  
— Geremia, Dec 25, 2008

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Stella

17 years 5 months ago

Hi Longo, This is a

Hi Longo, This is a beautiful write with some haunting lines. Mourning occurs in stages and this season is a difficult one. Wish you all the best, ~Stella
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loveyu74848

17 years 3 months ago

thank you for sending a

thank you for sending a reference... fires turned to ash... love turned cold... i enjoyed this poem...