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Dec 18, 2008
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Tomato salad (The inflated elephant)
The making of tomato salad must not be taken lightly
To you, it is the pinnacle of art:
“I have my own recipe for my own taste:
I need vinegar like an inflated elephant
and the tin of salt with the small holes
and, yes, I can stir it all with a teaspoon,
and if you think I´ve filled my bowl to the rim,
you´re mistaken,
even though I don´t really need any tomatoes in it.
But what I really wonder is: Will it last forever?”
Comments
Barbara Writes
17 years 4 months ago
Very interesting
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Barbara
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
my dear dragon,
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
when you say wise
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
hey,
RSScheerer
17 years 4 months ago
I remember this one
Ink Dragon
17 years 4 months ago
Thank you, Ronda,
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Nina
Ink Dragon
16 years 7 months ago
Jayne,