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Dancing with the Sun

DANCING WITH THE SUN    The Heart has its reason
 That
 Reason doesn’t understand
 That is the w ay we’re made
 In this God’s world
 We twirl around the sun
 Lost in a world of one
 Love’s devotion
 Another foolish notion
 You see
 We all seize the day
 Try find our w ay
 Before darkness falls
 We dance with the sun
 Till we can dance
 No more  
— Geremia, Dec 12, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 5 months ago

Longo...

I was looking back and found this gem... the life dance is attended by all but separately, individually... we dance... a beautiful thought here Longo... Richard
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

17 years 2 months ago

Dance on Longobard

Dance into the sun and send the light of your poems out like rays of hope, of warmth, of perception and tell us of deception too that we may dance as well as you. Dancing Anna
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 2 months ago

Dance, When you’re broken

Dance, When you’re broken open. Dance, If you’ve torn the bandage off. Dance, In the middle of fighting. Dance, In your blood. Dance, When you’re perfectly free. ~ Rumi Your poetry reminds me of Rumi. ~A