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Geremia
Geremia
Dec 11, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Sensations

SENSATIONS  Something strange has taken me A mesmerizing Hypnotizing Sweet melancholy A sense of me That sets me free From pain and sufferingA lingeriing
Sense of Self An independent entity Sensations Of what is and what is to be My reality
— Geremia, Dec 11, 2008

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

An extension of reality to define reality

Ann of Norway This is very existential and very romantic at the same time, ethereal self a spectre of self, an extension of reality to define reality for your self. Wonderful to be able to do this when in pain, just wonderful. I like this one my Longobardolino, yes I'm here, Annuccia

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