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Geremia
Geremia
Dec 04, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Near the bay

NEAR THE BAY Sauntering down a hot summer daySlowly making my waySearching for shadows near the bayWhereI can steal a breath or twoSultry and sleepless nightsWithout youI need to rest my mind somewhereThink without a careCatch a breeze of lovelinessSee the light beyond the mistSauntering down a hot summer dayHead hung lowSlowly making my own wayTill day’s endAlone again
— Geremia, Dec 04, 2008

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Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 9 months ago

Excruciating

That's all Anna d N. Such a beautiful description of the beach in the sun and the light and mists floating through your thoughts like diaphanous dreams, even the sadness has its loveliness when expressed in words from your mind Longobardolino. You give us strength in your dismay.