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Geremia
Geremia
Nov 17, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

HAUNTINGS

 HAUNTINGS What are these shadows That keep following me Feelings I thought would be Far in a distant place by now How do I let them go When do they release my soul From torment and despair Is time where I seek an end to this misery Or will this haunting last until my eternity
— Geremia, Nov 17, 2008

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Janice Pearce

Janice Pearce

17 years 6 months ago

Hauntings

Longo Although short, you got your thoughts across good job~ _____________________________ To write a touching poem, you must gently stir the soul, if it brings forth tears or smiles, then the story was beautifully told. ________Janice Pearce_________
Geremia

Geremia

17 years 6 months ago

Hauntings

J.B. Longo-Geremia Thank you :) POETRY They say Poetry Is a way To Sublimate reality. To soothe a tortured soul Or Cure a broken heart. A catharsis for a haunting memory. Fire and ice. A cold reflection Passion and affection An expression Of Joy and despair Love and care Through imagery Others see A mirror of Another Me.