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A Poem Is Not/Revised Again with Part 3

1.

A Poem is not a thought
all wrapped up in a pretty package
it is you out in the cold
it is you all alone
it is the silence that will not
speak of Love.

A Poem is not a tender Lover.

A Poem will break you in Two.

2.

It takes a lot of light
to write about how dark it is,
if you want to be a Poet
you have to want to pen
nothing at all, or nothing
but the truth
from the depths of
your every secret
with the finesse of angels
brandishing a fiery sword,
you have to want
to be fearless
and put your own lofty head
into the very jaws
of hunger itself,
find your own beating heart,
you must be willing to
give your life to the words
you will never be able to speak of,
and this is how a poet writes
in her own pool of blood.

3.

I thought in poetry
as a child until it was
taken away from me,
someone or another
making me fit into someone
or another, I fell into a
brook of rainbow trout
but i never forgot the moon

I mused in poetry as
an adolescent, trying to
fit into a new kind of skin,
I found no comfort
though
I learned to adore Love's
first touch,
the senses of arousal, the fire
in my eyes, burning

I wrote books of  Love in chapters
of poetry as a young woman whose
heart was broken and opened,
waterfalls of flesh,
torrents
in the
wild river of passion from which
I have yet to
return

I am a crone now, and poetry feeds
me seeds and makes me pregnant
with words.







— Kailashana, Nov 15, 2008

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Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

17 years 6 months ago

Anna,

when you write a poem it is like being out in the cold because you never know if it will be understood, it's not easy to bear whats in you into words, to hear some one take the meaning as something else, rather than what you indented. That's why I say that poets are some of the bravest people I know. to have the balls to put their feelings into words, and have the world read. yes I agree with all you have written here. This is a great job of bring to life the loneliness of a poet. thanks, Eddie "do like the once barren tree: flourish and like the planted seed: rise" Jose De Diego
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Eddie Part 2, went with Part

Eddie Part 2, went with Part 1; it's beginning was a sentence I answered to your *Poetic Predicatment*. We must be on the same wavelength tonight. ~A
yenti

yenti

17 years 6 months ago

Words

Kailashana, your piece touches us all as we move around, we write of all things, sometimes from our own ways, which as you say, is our own soul being bared for others to hold or walk on as their mood or inturpretation takes them. It I feel is the true poet, that can write of things that are of their mind, and not their reality, and still bring to others an understanding of a world seen but not lived in for the poet. Sometimes we read and can feel the suffering of the writer and it is real, tears do fall for them, and feelings are sent out. We smile warmly at their joy, and laugh with joy, at their being fine and at peace with the world. It sometimes becomes hard to know the difference, of which is which, then the true poet emerges even then to the critic where a mis-spelt word or comma lost is all that can be said of a work. You keep on with your moving pen, and the paper will make us pleased, as it portrays you, or that other world, Yours Ian.T
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zarul

17 years 6 months ago

HI

A lesson for a growing poet like me. wonderful, my dear lovely poet friend ZARUL
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Thank you my Beloved

Thank you my Beloved friends. If only one person understands, and is moved... and for a moment doesn't feel alone...perhaps it is enough. ~A
professor

professor

17 years 6 months ago

Poetry is a constant battle

between opposing forces Anna and a mirror that few can look into and feel comfortable with the image that confronts them. Sometimes at least from the pool of your own blood the Phoenix is truly reborn and it is that rebirth we all hope for rather than the simple inevitable spiral of despair and ultimate death. You express your feelings so well in words, as always. Keith
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pinksheep

17 years 6 months ago

poets

are tremendous so brave they may write about their inner angst, their failed love life , how marvellous, no one is so brave as to write a poem what could be braver than doing this ?Also thank christ someone has written a poem on a sunset tangoing that to me is looking straight ahead not going backwards-I shall mention one poet who wrote about illness S.Plath that to me is truly meaningful, to write about a subject such as this, and I myself do not believe that you put yourself out in the cold by doing this eg Spry wry among the narcissi. Percy is re-cuperating from something on the lung -May I speak, even though I am very simplistic at writng poetry, these poets out in the cold is it to do with facing the weather? if so point taken, or is it about writing about the homeless? if so point taken-
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

For me, the rug is

For me, the rug is constantly being pulled out from under my feet. However, that is not to say I don't experience a blissful life. I am a vagabond... home wherever I am. Much love and health to you and yours Pink Sheep. ~A "I searched for God and found only myself. I searched for myself and found only God." Sufi proverb.
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pinksheep

17 years 6 months ago

I

have been finkin .A poet could have a trite subject such as a 'failed relationship' a relationship that maybe a little bit itsy bitsy, though on reading some poetry this subject can be written about very well ,very well- Anyway i can hardly write i just like good poetry-'D'ont we all'-To me some of the best poems are tender whether about 'love' or not-However I read one poem about two people having a lovers tiff and chasing each other across Yorkshire in their cars , who wants to know? And that was about the poets best poem, This left me a bit puzzled-
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 6 months ago

Truth to a poets quill

To the poet, I as just me read your poetic piece of truth and lay my cover to ground. It is true the words to a point as truth is a trueism to a poet indeed. I my friend never to lay eyes upon, am just that to the words I place and a poet I'am a redneck and a man. So take the time to look to a stranger and ponder the gray that he or she holds. Far between the twix of a mix can a poet be found. I think this could be written agian yet I say why mess with the truth.
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

I did revise part 3……

I did revise part 3...... take a peek SAKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK.... and from now i'll call u K, k? "I searched for God and found only myself. I searched for myself and found only God." Sufi proverb.
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sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

17 years 6 months ago

Just you and the soul you hold

Hello poet, You can call me whatever you wish. I think as a poet your mind is well and to lay in the pool of blood of your own is well placed yet I have not done that at least to this day. I cannot or by chance will not express the pictures I have seen. As I my friend have seen many things that hold my gray to the edge yet I stand as a man just me. Good luck to your work my friend of true words as I will look from time to time just to see where on the place we call earth that you are. I would write you a poem yet my gray is sad still and not to write. So walk with me and a smile to the clover under your feet and the smile when you see the birds that bring you seed. By chance the day will come that I am hole agian. Yet I would not hold your breath as I take time to forget the truth placed to me in my life as she is all I have. See ya on the flip side and yes a good write. Steven A. Kacer
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pinksheep

17 years 6 months ago

I

have just been finkin again-Something i have never done in my 'poetry' though i attempt to 'go deep', is write something humerous , that is not easy though it is appreciated by readers-
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 6 months ago

Yo Pinky, check out the

Yo Pinky, check out the story-poem I just wrote called *Occam's Close Shave* Best time to write a humorous poem is when you're feeling a bit naughty. ;-) ~A "I searched for God and found only myself. I searched for myself and found only God." Sufi proverb.
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Mohammad Yamin Iraqi

17 years 6 months ago

A Poem Is Not

Kailashana, Your poem is a great write. You have very vividly painted a picture of what it is like to write a poem and what is poetry. So many comments have come, in which ideas about the subject have been expressed with honesty. I recall the verse of an eminent poet of Urdu Language, Ahmed Faraz which I reproduce here in original along with (not so good)translation: Ghazal Kahi to Lohu badan say Nuchad gaya hay Kay jaisay sehra-e-marg waadi khayal ki ho Ghazal writing has sucked every drop of my body's blood As if the valleys of thoughts were the deserts of death I as a poet, while wanting to tell the story of my anguish, don't wish the wounds of my heart exposed to the eyes of the reader. I want my feelings to put on veils and hide behind metaphors and imagery. The form of Ghazal suits me best for the desired veiled expression. It is not necessary that others should agree with the manner of my thinking. Best wishes. -Mohammad
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Jo Latimer

17 years 6 months ago

loved it

Not much more to say than that - especially loved the last 3 lines! Beautifully put. Regards, Jo
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blistered-pen

17 years 6 months ago

parts 2 & 3

wow. wow miss master of words. I love the FIERY SWORD. and the fact that you ' never forgot the moon ' this is beautiful and I love it. it's definitely going on my list of favorite poems of NEO.. if that's okay. :) kudos! (3 times!) wonderful imagery that flows in such truth and understanding..