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Nov 15, 2008
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A Poem Is Not/Revised Again with Part 3
1.
A Poem is not a thought
all wrapped up in a pretty package
it is you out in the cold
it is you all alone
it is the silence that will not
speak of Love.
A Poem is not a tender Lover.
A Poem will break you in Two.
2.
It takes a lot of light
to write about how dark it is,
if you want to be a Poet
you have to want to pen
nothing at all, or nothing
but the truth
from the depths of
your every secret
with the finesse of angels
brandishing a fiery sword,
you have to want
to be fearless
and put your own lofty head
into the very jaws
of hunger itself,
find your own beating heart,
you must be willing to
give your life to the words
you will never be able to speak of,
and this is how a poet writes
in her own pool of blood.
3.
I thought in poetry
as a child until it was
taken away from me,
someone or another
making me fit into someone
or another, I fell into a
brook of rainbow trout
but i never forgot the moon
I mused in poetry as
an adolescent, trying to
fit into a new kind of skin,
I found no comfort
though
I learned to adore Love's
first touch,
the senses of arousal, the fire
in my eyes, burning
I wrote books of Love in chapters
of poetry as a young woman whose
heart was broken and opened,
waterfalls of flesh,
torrents
in the
wild river of passion from which
I have yet to
return
I am a crone now, and poetry feeds
me seeds and makes me pregnant
with words.
A Poem is not a thought
all wrapped up in a pretty package
it is you out in the cold
it is you all alone
it is the silence that will not
speak of Love.
A Poem is not a tender Lover.
A Poem will break you in Two.
2.
It takes a lot of light
to write about how dark it is,
if you want to be a Poet
you have to want to pen
nothing at all, or nothing
but the truth
from the depths of
your every secret
with the finesse of angels
brandishing a fiery sword,
you have to want
to be fearless
and put your own lofty head
into the very jaws
of hunger itself,
find your own beating heart,
you must be willing to
give your life to the words
you will never be able to speak of,
and this is how a poet writes
in her own pool of blood.
3.
I thought in poetry
as a child until it was
taken away from me,
someone or another
making me fit into someone
or another, I fell into a
brook of rainbow trout
but i never forgot the moon
I mused in poetry as
an adolescent, trying to
fit into a new kind of skin,
I found no comfort
though
I learned to adore Love's
first touch,
the senses of arousal, the fire
in my eyes, burning
I wrote books of Love in chapters
of poetry as a young woman whose
heart was broken and opened,
waterfalls of flesh,
torrents
in the
wild river of passion from which
I have yet to
return
I am a crone now, and poetry feeds
me seeds and makes me pregnant
with words.
— Kailashana, Nov 15, 2008
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Critiques
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 6 months ago
Anna,
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Eddie Part 2, went with Part
yenti
17 years 6 months ago
Words
zarul
17 years 6 months ago
HI
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Thank you my Beloved
professor
17 years 6 months ago
Poetry is a constant battle
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Hi Keith, it’s taken many
pinksheep
17 years 6 months ago
poets
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
For me, the rug is
pinksheep
17 years 6 months ago
I
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
17 years 6 months ago
Truth to a poets quill
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
I did revise part 3……
sakkkkkkkkkkkkkkk
17 years 6 months ago
Just you and the soul you hold
pinksheep
17 years 6 months ago
I
Kailashana
17 years 6 months ago
Yo Pinky, check out the
Mohammad Yamin Iraqi
17 years 6 months ago
A Poem Is Not
Jo Latimer
17 years 6 months ago
loved it
blistered-pen
17 years 6 months ago
parts 2 & 3