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Nov 14, 2008
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Patio Peace
Patio Peace
Peaceful, mind clearing
Exuberating night air
Took me to a far away land
Of total peace and comfort
The night speak to my soul
Whisper to my heart, and
Soothe my mournful cries
Hidden deep inside
The darkness warmly visit
Surrounded all that’s bad
Showed me what was good, and
Carried me on a breeze
Now refreshed and calm
All that made me sad
Was carried by the wind
Far from where I sit
Peaceful, mind clearing
Exuberating night air
Took me to a far away land
Of total peace and comfort
The night speak to my soul
Whisper to my heart, and
Soothe my mournful cries
Hidden deep inside
The darkness warmly visit
Surrounded all that’s bad
Showed me what was good, and
Carried me on a breeze
Now refreshed and calm
All that made me sad
Was carried by the wind
Far from where I sit
— Barbara Writes, Nov 14, 2008
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