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Nov 01, 2008
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Places
PLACES
You brought me to places I’ve never been
Places I never want to see again.
Visions of heaven hiding Hell
Magical words of a demon’s spell.
Grown older. Colder .Wiser
Innocence violated in shattered reality
Incense burning at altar’s edge
Sanity reflected in madness.
— Geremia, Nov 01, 2008
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Jasmine
17 years 7 months ago
Fantastic Poetry
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
Brutal
Mason King
17 years 7 months ago
Wonderful meter and
orgami
17 years 1 month ago
inscence
Nordic cloud
16 years 11 months ago
yes I agree with you all