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Places

 

PLACES

 

You brought me to places I’ve never been

 Places I never want to see again.

Visions of heaven hiding Hell

Magical words of a demon’s spell.

Grown older. Colder  .Wiser 

Innocence violated in shattered reality

Incense burning  at altar’s edge

Sanity  reflected in madness.

 

 

— Geremia, Nov 01, 2008

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Jasmine

17 years 7 months ago

Fantastic Poetry

I love this poem...it says it all... Hugs, Jasmine XXOO
Mark

Mark

17 years 7 months ago

Brutal

Yes, I agree too. Mark Man thinks this.
MK

Mason King

17 years 7 months ago

Wonderful meter and

Wonderful meter and Acrostric, welcome to Neopoet. M
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orgami

17 years 1 month ago

inscence

sage sometimes i burn mens medicine inscence too for meditating a fine poem Longo