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Oct 27, 2008
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It breaks my heart to see you!
It breaks my heart to see you as often when we meet Your talking utter rubbish and unsteady on your feet We verbaly attack you telling you your wrong We hope that you will stop this and try to be strong You think that we don't love you We loath you for our gain You cannot see our anger stems from our pain It breaks my heart to see you and what you have become Society thinks our Jamie little more than scum In and out of prison nowhere to live only a capacity for taking with nothing to give My son you are dying and I can do no more The answer lies within you only you have your cure !
— Laura, Oct 27, 2008
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17 years 7 months ago
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