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Oct 27, 2008
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A poem of love
I am an angry person.
often.
Let me tell you a story.
There is a mountain
on the East coast of Australia, near Byron Bay.
Because it is so tall it gets the morning sun before the coast does.
To be there at sunrise you have to climb the mountain starting at four am.
It is a hard climb.
I heard someone crying.
Realised it was me.
It was hard.
But to be the first person in Australia to see the morning sun
it was worth it.
It is more.
It is a spiritual experience.
I flew with kookaburra,
I felt the spirit of the mountain.
I felt the numinous.
Yes, I know beauty and love.
I am a shaman, poet warrior, with love.
— weirdelf, Oct 27, 2008
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Critiques
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
With all due respect
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
too right. Will edit
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
the last line should be
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
good suggestion, thanks Tom
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
I am saving my stars
andyk
17 years 7 months ago
here here Tom
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Read his Watermana, Jess
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
aye
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
I agree with Jess, Jess, Tom, andyk and Anna
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
LOL, let the leaders do the fighting
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
cheers, Jess
Barbara Writes
17 years 7 months ago
Oh My
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
revisions
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
About time you got it right
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I do listen, just often don't agree
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
Damn ! Whatever !
Mark
17 years 7 months ago
A bit deaper
theladyblue
17 years 7 months ago
ahhhh...
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
thank you Emarie
theladyblue
17 years 7 months ago
hmmm...
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
It's not that complicated.
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Just to add to that,
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Fault? Is that a victimless
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
do we disagree?
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Btw every time i revisit
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
not surprised
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
Australia is also a very strange country
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
some of us were born
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I truly tear up thinking about that movie.
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Me thinks you’re a scamp &
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
I am a ratbag, a scoundrel and a truly moral person.
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
that is one funky photo
themoonman
17 years 7 months ago
Jess...
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
Moonman I might have known
weirdelf
17 years 7 months ago
hey anna, I've always known he was a lunatic
Kailashana
17 years 7 months ago
I never doubted it for a
poewriter58
17 years 7 months ago
Jess
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Jess,
Tink
17 years 7 months ago
Thanks Jess, I really
Electric Blue
17 years 7 months ago
Love Poems
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
Janice
R.M.Shanmugam
17 years 6 months ago
a good poem revealing the
Rottiestyl
17 years 5 months ago
Jess,I am going to ignore
Kailashana
17 years 5 months ago
nice to meet your
Rottiestyl
17 years 5 months ago
Lol! I do EXACTLY the same
docmaverick
17 years 5 months ago
A poem of Love...
rainbow
17 years 5 months ago
What can I say that has not
weirdelf
17 years 5 months ago
Wollumbin (Mt Warning)
Aden Recreated
17 years 5 months ago
I read this in my head and
weirdelf
17 years 4 months ago
thank you, Aden! that is an awesome comment to me.
Nem0x
17 years 3 months ago
Bravo!
Barbara Writes
17 years 3 months ago
Still a great poem
LiquidSunshine
16 years 10 months ago
Truely moving.
weirdelf
16 years 10 months ago
thank you Talia,
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Jess
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
As long as I don't inspire you to shoot me,
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
pmsl Funny buggar .. I am
Barbara Writes
16 years 5 months ago
Jess