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Jaina Nolee

Now just one more
Not two but now three

Heart full to bursting
Still a little room to grieve

The loss of a few eternities
Worth every tear, every dream

And with that I welcome you
My sweet, sweet Jaina Nolee

— theladyblue, Oct 10, 2008

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themoonman

themoonman

17 years 8 months ago

Ladyblue...

it is good to see you posting... when I first joined you were a great inspiration to me... congratulations on your new arrival... the loss of a few eternities worth every tear, every dream.... great line! hoping to see more of you... Richard
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 8 months ago

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Richard, As usual you are far too kind to me! I have missed everyone here as well! Now you know what I have been up to lol I had a very difficult pregnancy so as you can imagine it didn't leave much time for words lol great to hear from you again!!! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
Kailashana

Kailashana

17 years 8 months ago

I would be remiss if I would

I would be remiss if I would not offer you my years of experience. Though we love our children....our children grow up very quickly as I am sure you know. I've made sacrifices but if I knew then what I know now, I'd have been more courageous, I'd have had the love I deserved. Children give it but passionate women need to receive it from a man. ~A
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 8 months ago

Many thanks

Please let me say that I in no way shape or form intend to alter your perception of this piece. I feel that the reader's perception is the one and only thing that makes a piece work. However, the loss of eternities and grieving I spoke of were actually in reference to the miscarriages and loss' of my unborn children...I like so many women have experienced this loss and it is very hard for me especially with this last pregnancy to really wrap my head around and except but I must and how could I not with the three beautiful blessings I have received! Let me please thank you for your congratulations and well wishes!!! I hope that your life is as blessed as mine!!! "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..." <3 Emarie
theladyblue

theladyblue

17 years 7 months ago

thank you

she is my my third and final...I thought I would be sad but now I am just complete...its a wonderful feeling...thank you agian! <3 Emarie @~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@~~~~~~~@ "For every shadow, no matter it's depth, is threatened by the morning's light..."