Lost No More

Smiles:) Barbara Lost, found in love nice written flowed well

but this is not one of my favorite pieces. For me, there are too many tired phrases (unfathomable depths, calm harbours, lost without you, etc.). You can be so much more lyrical and descriptive. That said, I think this is a great theme - how love is both disorienting and orienting, secure and frightening. And I do think the final image of love and self reflected in a mirror is wonderful. I hope you'll consider revision. I'd love to re-read if you make some changes.

I like that a lot better. It also seems truer (more true?), in that emotional security is something built. I didn't read these lines carefully the first time: I have not measured how much love my heart can hold, indeed, it scares me the abyss into which it will tumble. Now that I have, I must say how much I like them. Recognizing one's need does take an act of courage. Psychologically astute, nicely written. Thanks.

How you are able to fuse trust and doubt together,I consider it something very great.Thank you for this one.

I love the end of this poem, the valitation of love, that goes beyond the feeling of being lost. thanks, Eddie "if a man does not know love, he does not know God"

Traveling back in time ... but this is brilliant loved it smiles love and hugs Jayne-Chloe