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Dance With the Devil

Dance With the Devil

I could count but eighteen years
A young man not quite grown
Chanced one night on an old man
Who was but skin and bone

I stopped by him to offer aid
But quickly turned my face away
My heart was filled with terror
At the words he had to say.

"I’ve danced with the devil
in the pale moonlight
I’ve crossed the swamps
In the dark of night.
I kissed a rattlesnake
by candlelight
And I once killed a man
just for being right.
I have been to heaven
and I've been to hell
I’ve done some things
that a man can't tell.
Look at me boy
don't forget this sight
Never dance with the devil
In the pale moonlight!"

Now I'm a man of fifty plus years
Sons and daughter that are grown
They've been good and I've been blessed
With grandchildren of my own

But I never danced with the devil
in the pale moonlight
I never crossed the swamps
In the dark of night
I've been to heaven
And I've been to hell
And I’ve done some things
That a man can’t tell
I love my children
And I adore my wife
But there are secrets
in every man’s life
If you want to be happy
If you want things right
Never dance with the Devil
In the pale moonlight

— Rett, Aug 25, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 9 months ago

Truly awesome

Smiles:) Barbara I really like how you have written this. it is one of your greatest work. i certainly want to avoid that dance
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you Barbara

I truly appreciate the kind words. Avoid that dance at all cost. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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barbsdad2003

17 years 9 months ago

how interesting

although I'm not much of a dancer, nor do I aspire (expire?) to be. but I've danced with the devil ... till I discovered the Christian god in him ... then I realized it was just me dancing---with myself. awkwardly, I might add. Thanx, Chuck PS: oh, yeah. I'm supposed to comment on your piece: it's quite well writ, I'm forced to say. but then my credibility's not the best, you know, since I'm an awkward dancer ... and one who dances ... with himself.
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Chuck

Thank you. I just have one burning question. Which one of you leads? You or yourself? Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Adjective

that is a descriptive thing. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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DarkinAZ

17 years 9 months ago

I agree with Chuck,

I am not a dancer, and I would rather do anything other than try to do that. I did like the poem however and I can relate. Good Job, Mark
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thank you my friend

The devil went down to georgia..*LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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easylife_2

17 years 9 months ago

Good write Rett

I sure can relate to this one.Thank you.
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks a lot easy

I truly appreciate it. Glad you liked it. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks Jance

I think an awful lot of us have been there and back and nope, it isn't pretty. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. It is appreciated very much. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 9 months ago

Devil.

this is a good one, Rett. I married the devil's brother when I was just 18. He was rebuked years ago.
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Good for you Linda

Rebuking him I mean. Thanks for the read. I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
weirdelf

weirdelf

17 years 9 months ago

Rett, so glad you remembered my words of wisdom,

I only meant if you dance with anyone in pale moonlight you can't be sure who it is. Shit, all the other stuff is just what we do if we play the pinball of life. Oh, and I enjoyed the dance. cheers, Jess
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Thanks jess

I should have realized it was you on a bad hair day. Yep, I remember those words. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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barbsdad2003

17 years 9 months ago

If I can squeeze in ...

a penny's worth: For those of us who're bald (and too sensitive about it---which I truly believe I am not), every day's considered bad-hair day. Thanx, Rett, Chuck
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

*LOL*, I'm getting there Chuck

When it is complete I think I'll get the first tattoo of my life. I think I will have "This End UP" tattooed on top. Just so there's no mistakes you see. My uncle used to say, "God made only a few perfect heads, the rest he covered with hair." Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
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orgami

17 years 9 months ago

beauty of the dance

Such softness of form such sharpness of feature the supple lithe movements under that pewter shine eyes gleaming the dazzle the daze the pall of pallour the pale of malice (he was a good dancer too)
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

*G* Thanks Orgami

I appreciate it. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 9 months ago

Rett

I can't dance, I can't talk, only thing about me is the way that I walk... oops.. wrong topic. I've danced with the devil when I turned my back on God. Luckily, God cut in, and asked if he could have the dance, and I was smart enough to agree. Nicely written peace. *looks into tea leafs* I see a spotlight in your future. Ok, you can have your hot cocoa back.... LOL! ~Jess ---------------------------------------------------- "I hope no one asks me to show them the ropes; I have no idea where they are. Maybe I can pull some strings and find out...." - George Carlin
Rett

Rett

17 years 9 months ago

Wheet Wheeeeew

OOPs, sorry, lost myself in the wiggle there for a sec. Good for you letting Him cut in. Glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate it my friend. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck