I can picture it. psst, don't tell anyone, but frigid is still wrong. drop the first d. Okay, I loved it. What now? *LOL* Can't wait til the next one. Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck

autumnphoenix

17 years 11 months ago

Hey Rett,

Thanks, "frigid, all I can say is dont type with out glasses after midnight. lol. You guys are great after the weekend I had. I am glad to be back on my writing again. Thanks again, for continuing to read my pieces. Dana p.s. I love the picture that cat made me smile. :)

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Thanks Dana

about the cat pic. And thank you for another good read. I can hardly find the keyboard, much less type w/o my glasses. *LOL* Respectfully, Rett: "If life is a bowl of cherries, why am I in the pits?" Erma Bombeck

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

not boring...

I love the haiku.. and this one is good.. like a still shot a post card if you will of children sledding down a hill on a cold wintery day... Hi Dana.. how are ya? Richard

Barbara Writes

17 years 11 months ago

I like reading haikus

Smiles:) Barbara this one is a joy to read

autumnphoenix

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Barbara

Thanks. I do to. Dana

autumnphoenix

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Richard

Let me say thanks for asking, I have had better weekends. I will not keep the memories of this weekend alive however. I will release them into the mire of yesterday before I fall asleep tonight. Thank you for your comments and reading my pieces. It is good to get back and read these from you guys. Now how have you been? I hope good and that you've been writing. I didn't get the time this weekend. I will make up for it soon. Thanks again, Dana

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Dana...

that is the best way to handle it, isn't it! Myself, I didn't write anything of value.. I cut grass and spent some time out with my youngest (Emma) , she loves the outdoors.. and we did have a beautiful weekend here... thank you Richard

autumnphoenix

17 years 11 months ago

The best

That sounds like the best weekend hands down. I have been writing this morning. I have had a few things push their way to the front of my brain. I allowed them free access and out to the paper they came. Three haikus and a freeform. I felt like I had been outside and a fresh breeze woke me. Thanks again Dana p.s. I don't believe any writing is of no value. It all has value we just need to wait until its relevent. :)

pinksheep

17 years 11 months ago

I

like the word slapping in slapping cheeks red , these words admirably describe the tour de force or power or violence of the wind- My regards to you- pink

autumnphoenix

17 years 11 months ago

Thank you

I was thinking of the force of the cold wind, as I was writing this. How sometimes it rips right through you. Nothting like a windy day is there? Thanks Dana

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