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Aug 14, 2008
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The Wolf (Posted again for Halloween)
The pen on paper moving to and fro
Takes me sometimes where I would not go
A pentagram on my palm aglow
And therein lies...
The Wolf
A growl, a nip, a flick of tail,
A howl, a bark, he takes to trail.
Night dark shape, flashing feet,
The wolf has come, hide 'neath the sheet!
Eyes like burning coals at night,
Hell hot breath, a snap, a bite,
A lance of fire deep in the brain,
A desperate cry, a searing pain!
Confused shapes move to and fro,
Hot salty taste, blood on the snow.
Images burn in black and white
The wolf has come, beware the night!
The sharp tang of familiar scent,
A howl, a bay, on trail he's bent!
Dim memories, confusion, something's wrong!
The pull of the moon, it's so strong!
A dim longing where pain resides,
The pack calls, push it aside.
The stalk, the kill, the fatal bite,
The wolf has come, tremble with fright!
The frenzied bloodlust, the prey, the fight,
Fleeting shadows, the moon, the night.
The fevered brow, the sweat, a sound,
Torn clothing, the blood-soaked ground!
The longing, the lust, the stealthy creep,
Dim awareness, the pain, bless-ed sleep!
The terror, the leaping, running unbound!
The wolf has come, beware the pentagram!
I decided to post this again since Halloween is coming up. I wrote this several years ago, but it wasn't very good. I posted it when I came here and several people helped me make a decent poem out of it. The major 3 were RSSCheerer, Poewriter58 and last, but not least, Purplemoondoll who is no longer with us in this life, but is still sorely missed.
Without them and this site, this poem would have languished in the realm of terrible, but with promise that they saw and helped me bring forth. That is the beauty of this site and it's premise. Improving your poetry and writing.
The poem is a tribute to the old black and white Werewolf movies. Lon Chaney and others along with the more modern ones with better effects. A favorite of mine starred Jack Nicholson.
I hope it is enjoyed by our new members as well as the old ones who have already read it. If there is any further improvements offered, I would appreciate the critique and will give it serious consideration. Thank you.
Takes me sometimes where I would not go
A pentagram on my palm aglow
And therein lies...
The Wolf
A growl, a nip, a flick of tail,
A howl, a bark, he takes to trail.
Night dark shape, flashing feet,
The wolf has come, hide 'neath the sheet!
Eyes like burning coals at night,
Hell hot breath, a snap, a bite,
A lance of fire deep in the brain,
A desperate cry, a searing pain!
Confused shapes move to and fro,
Hot salty taste, blood on the snow.
Images burn in black and white
The wolf has come, beware the night!
The sharp tang of familiar scent,
A howl, a bay, on trail he's bent!
Dim memories, confusion, something's wrong!
The pull of the moon, it's so strong!
A dim longing where pain resides,
The pack calls, push it aside.
The stalk, the kill, the fatal bite,
The wolf has come, tremble with fright!
The frenzied bloodlust, the prey, the fight,
Fleeting shadows, the moon, the night.
The fevered brow, the sweat, a sound,
Torn clothing, the blood-soaked ground!
The longing, the lust, the stealthy creep,
Dim awareness, the pain, bless-ed sleep!
The terror, the leaping, running unbound!
The wolf has come, beware the pentagram!
I decided to post this again since Halloween is coming up. I wrote this several years ago, but it wasn't very good. I posted it when I came here and several people helped me make a decent poem out of it. The major 3 were RSSCheerer, Poewriter58 and last, but not least, Purplemoondoll who is no longer with us in this life, but is still sorely missed.
Without them and this site, this poem would have languished in the realm of terrible, but with promise that they saw and helped me bring forth. That is the beauty of this site and it's premise. Improving your poetry and writing.
The poem is a tribute to the old black and white Werewolf movies. Lon Chaney and others along with the more modern ones with better effects. A favorite of mine starred Jack Nicholson.
I hope it is enjoyed by our new members as well as the old ones who have already read it. If there is any further improvements offered, I would appreciate the critique and will give it serious consideration. Thank you.
— Rett, Aug 14, 2008
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Critiques
DarkinAZ
17 years 9 months ago
I remember this!
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks a lot Mark
Candlewitch
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Cat
Sinbadthesailorman
17 years 9 months ago
Glad you did repost I didn't see it the first time
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Donnie
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
interesting thing about "Texas Chainsaw Massacre"
RSScheerer
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks, Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Ronda
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Janice
barbsdad2003
17 years 9 months ago
Uh-oh, I guess you're overdue ...
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Oh, the pain
Linda Moses
17 years 9 months ago
wolf
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Linda
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
weirdelf werewolf, is there a difference?
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
I'll be careful of weirdelfs!
amalzamani
17 years 9 months ago
Pentagram!
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Amazamani
Rob Graber
17 years 9 months ago
I enjoyed the poem, and
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
not to me to reply, it's Rett's poem
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Smacking Jess upside the head with a baseball bat
weirdelf
17 years 9 months ago
ha! a baseball bat all you got?
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Slapping nose with a rolled up newspaper
easylife_2
17 years 9 months ago
Nice job done
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks easy,
poewriter58
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Chrys
Janice Pearce
17 years 9 months ago
Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Ouch, a second
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
Watched many werewolf movies
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
*S* I did when young
Barbara Writes
17 years 9 months ago
I did too when young
yenti
17 years 9 months ago
the wolf
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Ian
tbeaudet
17 years 9 months ago
Another masterful poem here, Rett
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
*L* Thanks Tom
Samuel Johnnie Green
17 years 9 months ago
Confused, But I understand towards the end
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thank you Samuel
Samuel Johnnie Green
17 years 9 months ago
Anytime
Mark
17 years 9 months ago
Always
Rett
17 years 9 months ago
Thanks Mark
infinite_dwarf
17 years 7 months ago
I missed this one??
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
*LOL* Nobody can catch every poem Jess
tbeaudet
17 years 7 months ago
I remember
Eduardo Cruz
17 years 7 months ago
Rett,
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you Eddie
Nature Mithya
17 years 7 months ago
Wonderful the way handle this poem.
Rett
17 years 7 months ago
Thank you Nature
Proprietress o…
17 years 4 months ago
(Evil) Sir Rett,
Rett
17 years 3 months ago
Thanks Propriatess
Seren
16 years 7 months ago
Dear Rett
Rett
16 years 7 months ago
Thanks Jayne
Proprietress o…
16 years 7 months ago
my dear Rett
Rett
16 years 7 months ago
Welcome Back Proprietess
Rob Graber
16 years 7 months ago
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