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Voice of Reason

The voice of reason has arrived
helping all of us to "see",
gone, were the pathways we had strived
and dumb, were we collectively.

But, as far as our ambitions
and the hopes that help us pray,
we all endure transitions,
integrety's measured by what we do, not say.

Someday maybe I'll understand
why everyone's upset.
with a life so large, in our great land,
and every room, with a T.V. set.

If one were playing Poker,
most wouldn't play this "hand".
It's like a story by Brahm Stoker,
but, much less eloquent and grand.

So, without upsetting all around,
I will lay one fact, on you;
our lives, and blessings are merely "loaned",
so, we'd better adhere to what is true. 
— docmaverick, Jul 28, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

doc

well worded. Well written I've nothing to add or subtract or change about the wording Chrystie
docmaverick

docmaverick

17 years 10 months ago

chrys...

....Thanks alot. One question. Do you think naming it as I did, was a sort of "cop-out"? You know, because of it being a partial line in the poem? I'm going to have to get away from always naming the piece after I write it, because I seem to have a large propensity to do just that. By the way, I love the tiger. I gotta thang fer cats. doc. &:>{)
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poewriter58

17 years 10 months ago

Doc

No I don't in fact that is what is call the hook. I do that quite often with my work You refer to the white tiger? Chrys
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

doc

I was having trouble with the pic avatar also until I realized I had to reload the page after it was submitted. See if that helps. BTW, I have no comments on the poem except I enjoyed it. Rett: "If I die, I'm never gonna speak to you again!" Emma Dell Jurica, my mother.
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 10 months ago

Doc

Love the poem and the avatar! Tom