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Fine Strokes

Fine Strokes

Pleased with the part
you just combed in my hair,
you then helped me with my tie,
you pressed your kiss onto a tissue,
then called a taxi for a ride.
We lined up for our pictures,
bulbs flashed when we said cheese.
We still have that old photograph,
and I still have all these memories.

Kneeling down in St. Catherine’s pew,
during the 9 o’clock Mass,
I knew that you’d reach over soon,
to push forward on my ass.
If the Good Lord could suffer for all of us,
willing to accept His fate,
then I can certainly give Him an hour,
and I can certainly kneel up straight.

The faith and the values
you carved into my stone,
are as strong as my love,
they're scrimshawed on my bones.
My sense of humor, my respect,
my sensitivity,
were all gifts from you,
and I love you, Mommy.

Counting loose change for Dad’s camera,
pushing pennies into piles,
a surprise gift sure to capture,
his young children’s checkerboard smiles.
Newspaper spread across the den floor,
my Mom with her kids on their knees,
that camera’s long been replaced,
but never will these memories.

Always ready by my side, sleeves rolled up,
you’d take on the Pope,
if convinced that I was truthful,
after “the look” and plenty of rope.
You fought just like a pit bull,
always there to defend me.
You still have that fight, still have “the look”,
and I still have all these memories.

The faith and the values
you carved into my stone,
are as strong as my love,
they're scrimshawed on my bones.
Every fine stroke
others see painted in me,
were brushed by the artist
that I call Mommy.

Because the apple, apparently,
doesn’t fall far from the tree,
lots of good things about you,
were passed on to me.
Boy’s don’t appreciate their mother’s
until they’ve grown into men,
and if I had a choice,
I’d choose you for my mother,
all over again. 

 

— tbeaudet, Jul 28, 2008

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: Boston, USA

Favorite Poets: Patti Smith, Lucinda Williams, John Prine, Bruce Springsteen, Jim Carroll, Bob Dylan, Tom Waites

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Critiques

Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Sigh

You are like a fine craftsman sir. The words like a fine piece of furniture. The lines, the beauty and the craftsmanship a joy to behold. Beautiful read sir. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

I dido this T you take great care and share

Well funny you should mention the other title I too remeber Baking Soda as A fix all was it the times ? or the senseability of the times will we ever know? love this bunches Donnie/Sinbad I especially love the verse where she would roll up her sleves and take on the th Pope a vidid memorie
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

hats off

To this one. Well done, Tom. You should give this to her on mother's day next year. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The toilets at a local police station have been stolen. Police say they have nothing to go on..." - Ronnie Barker
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Well done

I'd choose you for a mother, all over again, says so much. I'm sure your mother would love to hear these words
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

By the way

Your picture of the little boy with the butter knife cracks me up
whitetea

whitetea

17 years 9 months ago

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I like the way you've structured this, it gets hard for me to write down everything that comes to mind cause I feel like it gets stuffy but you do it really well. It all fits.