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Shra-Ka-Reen, (Book I of II, Part I of IX)

Shra-Ka-Reen,
(Book I of II, Part I of IX)
Prologue, The Sleeper Awakes

Deep within the Mountains of the Stars
A lush valley sparkles and shines
Lovely glades, red and gold flowers,
Babbling brooks, water pure and fine
Shro-Ka-Loern stands waiting

There sits the Temple of Heaven
Ebony and silver it waits alone
As it awaited when first man came
Gazing in awe upon midnight stone
And the tower stretching skyward

Around the Temple a coal dark wall
Four the corners, a central tower
Wide the graceful entrance arch
Strong the gate guarding the power
Man dares not enter there

Through the arch a cobbled yard
To steps that spread so wide
That twenty could walk abreast
To the passage leading inside
Where is reached the inner tower

Brave the men around Shro-Ka-Loern
But foolish are those who tried
To breach the sacred temple
For those men have died
All know that death walks within

Through wax and wane of many moons
Fog in mystery has lain a shroud
And the temple has appeared
To float there upon a cloud
Strange noises from within

Sunlight touches upon the valley floor
Creeping through meadows and streams
Till it alights upon the temple gates
Within the sleeper awakes from dreams
To walk at last upon the land

— Rett, Jul 28, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 10 months ago

Extremely well written

albeit a step aside from your usual style. I prefer your usual style, but this is still beautifully crafted. Tom
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Tom

This is a bit of a stretch and I honestly don't think it will fly and I think I will have wasted a lot of writing.*LOL* That's the way it goes though. It won't be the first time. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
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DarkinAZ

17 years 10 months ago

Well, friend

I agree, I like your usual style, there is some beautiful imagery here however this just did not bitch slap my soul like your usual writes. Your friend, Mark
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

*LOL*

Hmmm, I guess I will just have to bitch slap your soul with something else. Thanks a lot Mark, I truly appreciate it. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

omfg

you two are hilarious. You could be like in Monty Python, and bitch slap his soul with a dead fish... whatcha think?? Poem would make for a good short story, I think. Maybe expand on it, and move it to the appropriate section? ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The toilets at a local police station have been stolen. Police say they have nothing to go on..." - Ronnie Barker
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Oh boy!

Have I got a poem for you tomorrow Mark!*bwah ha ha ha ha* Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Oh no...

Something tells me not to drink fluids while reading whatever it is that you're going to write.... can't wait! ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The toilets at a local police station have been stolen. Police say they have nothing to go on..." - Ronnie Barker
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

evil wicked,

Soul slappin hahahahahahahahahahahahaHA! Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
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prayersbyPatty

17 years 10 months ago

Rett you have a gift

I know the door you speak of, it will open when ready. I still think with your gift of words could easily write a book. Get started cause I want a signed copy before I go to the "better" side of life. pick a subject and get going before the slap comes from a true "former" bitch.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Actually

I have started one based on the story in this poem that you see part one of. I don't know if I can actually write a book Patty, but hey, I can take rejections from book publishers as well as the poetry publishers. *LOL* I might post the part I have done so far on my blog today. I just started. I finished my outline and started on chapter one. Respectfully, Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum