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Heartaches and Lace

Heartaches and Lace
Enter the lady, all dressed in black,
She made her choices, now it's all coming back,
But no-one will know what price she has paid.
She's mourning the innocence lost when she strayed.

Her eyes used to sparkle, her face lit with smiles.
But too many places and too many miles
Has stolen her laughter, hidden it away.
She lives with her choices, goes her own way,

Enter the lady, all dressed in black,
Her memories are churning, they keep going back
Reliving the past and her fall from grace.
A somber expression is etched on her face.

She once wore satin all covered with lace
Her make-up was a smile, the glow of her face
The sound of her laughter was music to hear.
And he was the boy that she once held dear.

Enter the lady, her thoughts going back,
To the love she once left so far in the past,
To lovely spring mornings, now gone from sight,
Wishing for words that would make things alright!

Enter the lady, all dressed in black,
Enter the lady, she can never go back.
There in the doorway, always alone.
Enter the heartache I thought was gone!
— Rett, Jul 26, 2008

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Region, Country: Southern Texas, USA

Favorite Poets: Dickenson, Longfellow

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infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

17 years 10 months ago

Rett

I came, I saw, I voted... LOL! Will come back with better thought out comments in the morning. ~Jess K. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "The toilets at a local police station have been stolen. Police say they have nothing to go on..." - Ronnie Barker
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Wonderfully sad

Smiles:) Barbara this is very good writing, enjoyed reading it. not sure of title meaning, but all else is great. maybe when i read again later, will see the title meaning in this well written piece.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Since 2 in a row

questioned the title, I looked at it with fresh eyes and it maybe sounded a little strange. Renamed it. Thank you for reading and commenting. it is appreciated a lot. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
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easylife_2

17 years 10 months ago

nice one friend

This is very well written rett,I only have reservations about the title but that's just an opinion.Thank you
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Easy

Since you and Barbara questioned the title, I renamed it. I have to admit that maybe the title wasn't the best choice. Thank you very much. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Heartache and Lace

Smiles:) Barbara A fitting title describing marriage and heartache dress in black and the lady that wears it. Great descriptive writing, enjoyed your creativity in this piece.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you

Barbara. I was wondering is anyone would catch the references to "She once wore satin all covered with lace" reference as when she got married and the "all dressed in black" denoting the divorce. Good call. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

Shock myself on this one

Smiles:) Barbara Many times I am off the target. Happy to have gotten it right. Saw the wedding then the despair leading to divorce. Though I fell short of picturing the actual divorce as I have never been there. Great write Rett, a beautiful sad song
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Well

You were dead on the money with this one. Verse 3 hints at what happened. Thanks for a very astute reading. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

17 years 10 months ago

elegant description

Smiles:) Barbara verse three was brilliant in that it elegantly depicts divorce as falling from grace your writing just keep getting better.
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zarul

17 years 10 months ago

enjoyed it

i think this piece would be beautiful if it sung as song.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Zarul

It was written as a song and the music my oldest boy made up for it is beautiful. It can almost bring you to tears. Thanks a lot my friend. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
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amalzamani

17 years 10 months ago

I love the title

I agree with zarul, it would make a wonderful song. Sad but nicely done!
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Amalzamani

It was sad long ago, now it is just a sad song for a man that has a great life. Thank you for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate it. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
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rider68

17 years 10 months ago

Very nicely done

Hi Rett very touching, thoughtful, but sad, again very well done, Regards Peter ~~~~~~~~~Creativity Is to think more efficiently~~~~~~~~~~
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Peter

I really appreciate it. As you could probably tell it was written as a song. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 10 months ago

BRAVO

This is another masterpiece, Rett. Loved it...love the title as well. I need to hear the music. You did it again! Tom
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Tom

I could have sworn I replied, but I guess I am senile. da da dah da da.. picture a waltz my friend. Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum
Linda Moses

Linda Moses

17 years 10 months ago

Lady

It does well as a waltz. I imagined Garth Brooks, and 1 2 3 and it all fits. Good one.
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Thank you Linda

I appreciate it so much. I have a lot of Gart Brooks also, plus Black Sabbath. I am a study in contrasts. *LOL* I used to drive my friends crazy as a teenager. I might play Led Zepellin and follow it up with Jeannie C. Riley. *LOL* Repectfully, Rett: "This way to the Great Egress" P.T. Barnum