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Jul 25, 2008
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AUGUST 18
AUGUST 18 Conventional cloudy rainCovered with visible thick hazeMade the sea and the swamp to disappearThe green were as hard to findAs the short air-strip of sprigs Payne Belated voice from the towerShouted, “Man you’re too high”But the eagle dived and landedWith a rebounding jumpAnd lost a third of the runway Fate of travelers rolled helplesslyAnd tumbled on sandy plain belowEmergency was briefed on exitsItems left behind awaitedThe spark that ended all in fire It was fear and panic, overwhelmedBy great sense of lossAs goods fuelled the infernoAnd raw cash went with the smokeTears like rain-drops flooded the scene Efforts and sacrificesWere treasures transformedInto charred glorious pastLeaving a shocking dust of emptinessAt the portals of life and death
— t. reflexion, Jul 25, 2008
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tbeaudet
17 years 10 months ago
A Tragic Story
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
August 18
t. reflexion
17 years 10 months ago
Thank you