This crowd is drunk

Anna and Cat, Thank you for reading my poem and commenting on that. :) Darya

Thanks T. Reflexion for your words of encouragement. I really like to see how others interpretate my poems. I am looking forward to read your works. Darya

thanks everyone for the comments ...please keep them comming ......... Mark I like your photo/avator..........I am very much into anything with engine ...........I love sport cars but I have never ever tried bikes .......I should give it a try ......it should be fun : ) Sam.....the fact that despite all these one still search for love is something that i wanted to high light in my poem........ like no matter how your heart has been broken in the past .........still you won't give up and you look forward ..........hope is not a bad thing...... by the way everyone just to let you know English is my second language so please forgive my shortcommings .......I try to work on that langugae thingy and more important on my typing skills thanks again for all your comments Darya

I like the repeating lines. It just came to me as I started writing it.......you know...... I never plan ....so I just write as soon as I feel it in me ........I also felt that I should end the poem with something else but then nothing came to me at that point but ony to repeat the repeating line. It is just my search for love .......it keeps repeating itself over and over again Thanks for your comments

Mark, I go for a wiser Love instead of deeper one. ALthough I am not sure such a thing sucha as " wise Love " even exists.. perhaps love is crazy and it only gets deeper in its foolishness by the passage of time : ) Weirdelf, Thanks for the comments. whine ? I had to look at dictionary to see what it means I wrote " with the roots" like a plant that absorbs water from the roots then it sends it up against gravity....... I think to its roots sounds the other way around........ but if " with the roots " ....does not make sense in terms of what I have in my mind .then I may change it .....the problem is I sometimes think Farsi ( my langauage ) then I translate it and it may end up loosing the meaning that I had in my mind.... How this sounds to you? This crowd is drunk With the whine of self Undesirable poetry Grows profusely where it’s not wanted And I am in search of love Still Every night I come to the tavern Like I have no other place to go A bitter poison vitiates and corrupts my mind I drink it to the roots of my soul And I am in search of love Still Each time that I open this door I walk through a seemingly endless time Of no beginning and no ending It is the absence of truth And I am in search of love Still and thank you for thinking that my English is excellent ............although I think my English is just Ok .. :)

Anna, I disagree with you. I think someone who is loveless has no heartaches to go through. Tom, I should say I am agree with you. Jess, thanks for stopping by and reading the new version. Mark, Love is crazy and foolish ..........no meaning or wisdom ever comes out of the heart thanks everyone for the comments .....by the way how many members this site has? It seems that this site is a wall wrapped with another wall and another and another .........it seems that you are separated from the rest of the community..........one never gets a chance to interact with all the members....it sounds like a horror movie .........you get in and you hear voices but you never can reach them ...... you enter a room and all of a sudden the door will be closed and you are trapped there only... am i right ? or am i thinking crazy ? I think the second questions matches me better :)

we are in touch only through our poetry. and....... it is always lonely

not sometimes but always ......always at least for me

Thank you so much Ricahrd.....

Rob, I keep forgetting to add " the " . Thanks ..... I meant tavern in a mystic way ( whatever that way is !?) but not really a bar ....