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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Jul 23, 2008 ⭐ See this poem's read count — a supporter feature

Sixty Seconds until the Abyss has been selected for publication @ wikinut.com

Sixty Seconds until the Abyss
Has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

http://nut.bz/24z43220/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Jul 23, 2008

About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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tbeaudet

tbeaudet

18 years ago

Sinbad

this is a beautiful piece you have here. It needs a little cleaning up though. A few spelling errors, grammatical errors that when fixed will really polish this up. I am available to help you clean it up if you want, or leave it as is because this is yours and it is good. Tom
Rett

Rett

18 years ago

I second Tom

Good piece. Well written and a few spelling and grammatical errors. Two that stick out badly are Locoust=locust and feramornoes=Pheromones. I enjoyed the read very much Donnie?. Thank you for a very nice read. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
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barbsdad2003

17 years 12 months ago

Wow!

This is my favorite of all your posts. Thanx, Chuck
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 11 months ago

Hi Sinbad...

other than a few spelling errors and a structure clean-up, this is very good... very good! glad to see you here and posting... Richard
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 11 months ago

Hey Richard Thanks I be very tied up this month

And the highs and lows are mounting still T has giving so insights and I will be corecting and changig this a bitt soon But again I am near out of time and it looks like rain so I be making for home Thanks I never have enough time to read everyone is producing so much and the site has grow so I am try to spread my time around but just not enough Thanks again Donnie
Rett

Rett

17 years 11 months ago

Donnie, this is a fine

Donnie, this is a fine editing job sir. I think the only error I could find was apatite which should be appetite. Other than that you did a gret job. Love the poem! Respectfully, Rett: "On life; Ah such a wondrous thing, beauty and love to behold and experience! On death; I can wait to see..." Rett 2008.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 11 months ago

Thanks Rett Tom Has help me too

and if ever i get my computer back I should do better as I have said before unless it is pointed out I would most likely think it to be corect and not fixed it I will change as soon as I can thanks Donnie
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 6 months ago

Love it

Sinbad.. Nice job. I really like this one. Just fix Morn = Mourn Tom

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