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Sinbadthesailorman
Sinbadthesailorman
Jul 23, 2008 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sixty Seconds until the Abyss has been selected for publication @ wikinut.com

Sixty Seconds until the Abyss
Has been selected for publication @wikinut.com

http://nut.bz/24z43220/

A thought by Sinbad the Sailor Man
— Sinbadthesailorman, Jul 23, 2008

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About the Author

Region, Country: U.S. A. Indiana, Valparaiso, USA

Favorite Poets: Robert Frost, Walt Whitman, Samuel Taylor Coleridge, Carl Sandburg these I have read some And so Many More. I have no Favorite or any that I dislike. Whom I consider to be poets; of course there are many Dark and hateful souls, who would cry out and to I will lend an ear, but some. They just leave a awful taste in my heart that I can not bear to read twice. Let alone as many times I would do normally; as I must.

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Critiques

tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 10 months ago

Sinbad

this is a beautiful piece you have here. It needs a little cleaning up though. A few spelling errors, grammatical errors that when fixed will really polish this up. I am available to help you clean it up if you want, or leave it as is because this is yours and it is good. Tom
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

I second Tom

Good piece. Well written and a few spelling and grammatical errors. Two that stick out badly are Locoust=locust and feramornoes=Pheromones. I enjoyed the read very much Donnie?. Thank you for a very nice read. Rett: "A lie gets halfway around the world before the truth has a chance to get its pants on." Winston Churchill
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barbsdad2003

17 years 10 months ago

Wow!

This is my favorite of all your posts. Thanx, Chuck
themoonman

themoonman

17 years 10 months ago

Hi Sinbad...

other than a few spelling errors and a structure clean-up, this is very good... very good! glad to see you here and posting... Richard
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

Hey Richard Thanks I be very tied up this month

And the highs and lows are mounting still T has giving so insights and I will be corecting and changig this a bitt soon But again I am near out of time and it looks like rain so I be making for home Thanks I never have enough time to read everyone is producing so much and the site has grow so I am try to spread my time around but just not enough Thanks again Donnie
Rett

Rett

17 years 10 months ago

Donnie, this is a fine

Donnie, this is a fine editing job sir. I think the only error I could find was apatite which should be appetite. Other than that you did a gret job. Love the poem! Respectfully, Rett: "On life; Ah such a wondrous thing, beauty and love to behold and experience! On death; I can wait to see..." Rett 2008.
Sinbadthesailorman

Sinbadthesailorman

17 years 10 months ago

Thanks Rett Tom Has help me too

and if ever i get my computer back I should do better as I have said before unless it is pointed out I would most likely think it to be corect and not fixed it I will change as soon as I can thanks Donnie
tbeaudet

tbeaudet

17 years 5 months ago

Love it

Sinbad.. Nice job. I really like this one. Just fix Morn = Mourn Tom